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Reviews for Greenery Day

By : hsaotome
  • From ANON - kabs on April 10, 2016
    love it, hope it's updated soon
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  • From Imsadistic on November 12, 2015
    Loving it, you always keep us waiting for the 'p' scene (penetration), bad boy. Glad to see you're writing again. I don't really get around much anymore. Wunderbar, Sid xoxo
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2015
    Very nice! I'm always happy to find a new Groundhog story, and yours is well written to boot! Other reviewers have already mentioned _Chunin Exam Day_; if you haven't already read it I would suggest _Time Braid_ by ShaperV (which I think has also been mentioned, only not by name). With inspiration from those stories, this might be a good time to let the loop extend a little, so that Ranma gets to deal with some repercussions and doesn't get too stuck in his "It doesn't really matter" mindset. It will also force him to experiment a bit to find the proper triggers, and will eventually give you the possibility to let a few more characters show up. Possible triggers could include continuing to the next day if he had sex that day -- or, to make sure he doesn't just settle down with Nabiki, if he had sex with *somebody*new* (for that loop, at least) that day; after all, once he gets access to Monday there will be girls in school he can try to seduce as well... (There should probably be other ways to extend as well, though, since having to seduce a new girl each day would be quite hard work, and even a school full won't last him all that long. Or the effect could last longer than a single day.) Well, that's something that came to mind while reading. Keep up the good work! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 15, 2014
    Size does not matter to a degree considering location of nerves. Too large is usually too painful though, because hitting the cervix is not pleasant from what I have read in medical journals. A number of guys have difficulty controlling themselves especially in climax so the ones who are too large can hurt a girl and leave a bad impression. If it was the girl’s first time it is far from impossible that she will develop trauma.
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  • From ANON - kalaong on December 08, 2014
    Whee! Nabiki can't resist a dare any better than Ranma can!
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  • From ANON - Geral on December 06, 2014
    Yeah, really funny, really, dont like me Moxibution..., but is your estory, please continue
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  • From JH on December 02, 2014
    Omg! I'm so happy this has been updated!
    I love this story, plz keep it up :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 24, 2014
    This story is awesome. Can you update again soon, its extremely rare to read a decent Ranma Fanfic that doesnt involve Ranma getting raped, by Ryoga. Hoping for more aweseomeness.
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  • From ANON - meow on November 15, 2014
    Hi! Found your story on some time ago actually, and was checking for updates when I decided to give you my appreciation. Excellent story! That last chapter with Kasumi was very impressive, that's quite the cute perspective you gave her! I look forward to more chapters and you expanding on the Ranma/Kasumi relationship :)
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  • From JH on September 28, 2014
    Dude, this story blew me away, I thought it would get pretty dull, pretty fast, only having day 1 to work with. But you turned out to be a friggin genius!
    The creativity in this story so far, has gotten me hooked, add to that, that your writing is superb, and I cant wait to read more, please divide your attention to this story, above your other stories
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  • From porphyra on September 02, 2014
    Nice to see it updated, I enjoy this a lot more than Moxibustion Violation (at least the little I could bear to read), I'm not really into noncon and blackmail, especially from the victim's POV.
    This story on the other hand is highly entertaining, I love any form o fRedo fics, a genre that also has a lot of kinky potential, something few authors take up.
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  • From ANON - Annymous on September 01, 2014
    Awesome fanfiction. Hilarious and yet very interesting to read, to see what's going to happen next. I also like the increasing level of actions with each chapters where Ranma is willing to go.
    I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Janusmaxwell on June 23, 2014
    This just got AWESOME! How long til the next chapter
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  • From Nytefyre on December 25, 2013
    Okay, this was a fun look at how Ranma would react, and explore. He's roaming a bit further afield than in Groundhog Day - not fixated on one person, thing, or even why he's in this situation. It would be great to see more.

    Thanks for posting.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2013
    This is so good :)
    Can't wait to see what's going to happen next!
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