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Reviews for Heat of the Moment

By : Bishonen
  • From ANON - Bad Bunny Mommy on January 09, 2014
    This really was delightful. I would have a hard time deciding whether I like this, the story about Blaziken and the trainer from the other game, or the story about Cheryl and Gardevoir better. I still find the idea of a Pokemon capturing a trainer positively enticing, but the sweet stories of love with this story and Gardevoir's story are just as wonderful. I think I might actually like this one better, however, because Gardevoir can communicate fully with Cheryl, while the love Rapidash has for this trainer is not so easy. I really enjoyed the lead-in to the sex, too, it made it seem very real. I think you might have gone overboard a little with the sex with how many times Lara came in the beginning and when Lara's using Rapidash's insides as a Stair Master, but that's a minor complaint, and overall I enjoyed this very much.
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  • From ANON - menisdea on October 24, 2013
    i have read pokemon and human stories about pokemon other than human-like ones before but very rarely any f/f ones and definitely no good ones, this was really cool to find and read!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 28, 2013
    Holy Crap bra is this shit for real? I been lookin for rapidash-human lezzie porn for a year, solid! Props dog, this is hella tight!
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  • From ANON - Easy Breezy Beautiful Cover Girl on September 02, 2013
    Um.......well......at first I was kind of disgusted with you and I thought I would just skip it, but after a while I figured I would just take a look because maybe you made her human or something. But by the time it was clear you weren't gonna do that, I was kind of interested, and now that I'm done, I think I......I actually kind of liked this! I can't believe I actually enjoyed a poke-beastality story, but.....it was hot, I can't try to deny it! I really don't know if I ever want to see you make something like this again, but I still have to say, good job!
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  • From ninesenshi on September 02, 2013
    Great story, sexy stuff. I think you may have gone a little far with the two legs insertion plus `bicycling' but overall good job.
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  • From ANON - The Todd on September 02, 2013
    Lesbian Horse Sex So Hot It Makes The Reader Uncomfortable To Know They Enjoyed It This Much Five!
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