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Reviews for A Misunderstanding Between Two Masters

By : Blanche_Conrad
  • From phoeyay on October 19, 2013
    I'm afraid I must agree with you... these characters really do seem a bit OOC. Judging from how awesome your other yaoi pairings are for this series, I know you can make this one better. I'd say the biggest issue is that you take the slapstick a bit too far, and it eclipses the characters' personalities and any sexual tension that would otherwise make it very enjoyable.

    The question is, what do you want to do? Do you really like this pairing, or is this more of a 'throwaway' story (i.e. a total joke story which isn't meant to be taken seriously at all).

    I'd say if it's a joke story, make it even shorter, even sillier, and more OOC. On the other hand if it's a pairing that's close to your heart, I'd almost suggest write a new one about these two with an entirely different set-up, as the setup itself for this one makes it difficult to take too seriously.
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