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By : Rezalda
  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2015
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2013
    Who knows? I'll tell you who fucking knows. The Shadow, that's who.
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  • From ANON - The Todd on December 16, 2013
    Lesbian Love-Hate Sex Five!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 16, 2013
    Um...a lot of this was written very well and realistically, but then there were many moments that were so juvenile, or simplistic, or just off, that they just completely throw the reader for a loop. Overall good, I guess, but those moments really make me scratch my head at the difference gap. What woman can't get herself off with her fingers? Do you really think we wouldn't have gotten the joke about never coming up empty from muff diving? Do you really think tossing out half a dozen silly euphemisms like "sausage wallet" and the like is going to read smoothly? Etc. Sometimes it read like a story trying to be taken seriously, sometimes it read like a really, really forced comedy, sometimes it read like a well-written lemon, and sometimes it read like a horny teen boy's fantasy during math class. It's just all over the place. Still, good overall, I guess.
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