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Reviews for Moondance

By : DrunkenScotsman
  • From ANON - JRC_1700 on December 04, 2016

    Once again, an excellent story. Thank you for writing it. I'm really looking forward to reading the next installment.


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  • From ANON - Gabe on November 17, 2014
    Great story!!!
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  • From Aysha on August 08, 2014
    I finally got a chance to read the last chapter. Moka going solo was a pleasant surprise, and Yukari getting to watch was really cool! unfortunately unless Tsukune actually asked her to do it I don't see it this version of Moka being with another girl. So I think you did good resisting that temptation. Inner Moka however I think that might be a different story. At least I hope so! :D
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  • From ANON - Death From Above on July 23, 2014
    I was pleased by this chapter.

    Although I can't help but feel sad for Yukari. I wonder if there will be at least a satisfying ending to this whole series since this story ended on a somewhat sad note.

    Oh well, I hope it all works out. Great job.
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  • From ANON - Ego Killer on July 23, 2014
    So Moka finally took Inner Moka's advice.

    Saw that coming and I was not disappointed.

    Can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Fading Light on July 23, 2014
    This was a satisfying conclusion.

    I do feel a bit sad for Yukari but I'm sure you have something planned that will be satisfying for all the girls.

    Well done.
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  • From Aysha on July 19, 2014
    That was really cool, I was hoping for bit more in depth explanation of the love bite, because it's a very cool idea. Does it make tsukune more or less attractive to other female vampires, or does it mean that other female vampires can't get involved with him? Does it affect tsukune in any other way?

    For some reason I think it's really funny when Moka puts Kokoa in her place.
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  • From ANON - Death From Above on July 18, 2014
    This was not a disappointing chapter.

    I hope we see more of Inner Moka in the near future. She deserves to be out more often than they allow in the anime.
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  • From ANON - Fading Light on July 18, 2014
    Ha!

    Kokoa has a dirty side. The conversations between Inner Moka, Kokoa, and Outer Moka were surprisingly well done.

    Kudos.
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  • From ANON - Ego Killer on July 18, 2014
    This chapter gave a bit more clarity than anticipated.

    I have come to really like this interpretation of Inner Moka.

    Good job.
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  • From ANON - Fading Light on July 10, 2014
    I don't know where this story will be heading now but I Really Really REALLY hope that Kokoa becomes involved in his harem!

    She is just too cute to pass up!

    I really hope you consider adding her!
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  • From ANON - Ego Killer on July 10, 2014
    This was a good chapter. The anticipation for the next is almost unbearable.

    I am curious though. Will Kokoa be a part of his harem? I vote for yes since there are not many stories that involve Tsukune and her.

    Keeping up hope for that one. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Death From Above on July 10, 2014
    So now there is a cliffhanger and I must wait a whole week for the next chapter.

    You sure know how to keep my attention. Well done.
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  • From Aysha on July 10, 2014
    Okay that was a good chapter, I liked it from the title to the end, except where it ended. (This is where I would normally type out the frown-face EMO but for some reason that makes all the text you write after it disappear when you click the review button)

    you may also want to know that I spotted what appeared to be three mistakes. The first was at the bus stop in the human world where you left the T out of stop. The second was: "Just sitting next to him is keeping the flames lit" I know it's a bit on the technical side but shouldn't that be was instead of is? And the third mistake: "On her shoulder, Kou the bat, Kokoa’ ever-present familiar/weapon" I believe you left the s off of Kokoa's

    I'm actually glad that you brought Kokoa into the story it's a good way to get that bike explained. Though knowing you she won't get added to Tsukune's harem even though she starts to fall for him toward the end of season two. (Personally I like strawberries) lol

    anyway can't wait to see how this thing continues to develop! TTYL


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  • From Aysha on July 09, 2014
    Sorry I didn't get a chance to review before now, I've been a bit busy. I enjoyed this chapter a good deal. It's not as descriptive as I like things but very passionate. I was surprised by Moka biting him and thought it was a nice touch bringing out that aspect of her character. I do hope that later in the story you explain why exactly it happened, I'm really curious. I'm also desperate to find out the reaction of other Moka… You do realize that Tsukune just busted a nut in her without wearing a condom or should I say in them without wearing a condom. It's understandable that inner Moka might overlook something like that, seeing as how she lacks worldly experience, but Tsukune should have known better and if they get pregnant other Moka will be passed.
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