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Reviews for Breeder

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  • From nakedman23 on July 15, 2022

    I liked all of the chapters, your story rocks.

     


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  • From nakedman23 on December 02, 2019

    are you going  to make a sequal?


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  • From ANON - J.Nathan Spears on December 04, 2015
    Awesome finale, dude! :) Still, I'm not a fan of Misty, you know... but I'm glad her stupid sisters got their comeuppance.

    Also, how ironic that the lead Farmer Greyson had a terminal illness. HA! Karma, bitch!! And somehow Ash managed to use him to her advantage! Cool! Anyway, about the "no touching me, EVER!" condition... I think that Greyson was too worried with his cancer to concentrate on getting his wood worked on xD. So... GOOD RIDDANCE!

    And it is good that Ash gave back the humanity to all girls there... I mean, that's so IN CHARACTER! :D Ash is a just the nicest boy... eerrr... girl around! xD

    In the end, cool story! I cannot wait to read the spin-offs and know what happened to Iris, Jessie and many others. Also, What happened to Gary Oak and Delia? O_o

    Good luck!
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  • From ANON - Joyce on November 27, 2015
    Great story! My favorite chapters were the one about Bellsprout and the last chapter.
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  • From ANON - sav on November 25, 2015
    I liked this it's a fairly good ending. Bit od a shame we didn't see Gary reacting to her totally rejecting him. Didn't he want a crack at her way back in chapter one?
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  • From ANON - A. Beckwith on October 06, 2015
    Hi I am intrested in your stories and would love too do some free proofreading for you . Please email me or TEXT me. alexthechef12@gmail.com. 07580 222026 . Thanks alot.
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  • From ANON - A. Beckwith on October 06, 2015
    Hi I am intrested in your stories and would love too do some free proofreading for you . Please email me or TEXT me. alexthechef12@gmail.com. 07580 222026 . Thanks alot.
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  • From ANON - A. Beckwith on October 06, 2015
    email me or TEXT i would love to do some proof reading for your future stories. I especialy liked the pokemon breeder one with ash.
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  • From Joseph_Nathaniel_Spears on September 07, 2015
    Interesting... so tjat bitchy Misty appeared at last. And she is deepest friends with Ashy-girl... well, that was a surprise for me, at least.

    Too bad this is the last chapter. I cannot fathom what tipe of ending awaits for Ashy-girl... and well, I think I'll have to wait for the Spin-off to see what happens to Iris, Jessie, and other girls like Burgundy or Miette. Yeah, I love nearly all the newer girls. I doubt Zoey falls here, as she looks too much manly xD.

    See you later ;P
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  • From ANON - Nanapriss on September 04, 2015
    If you could, would you do a especial chapter with Iris breeding with Lance's pokemon and other dragon types. Lance may have found her in the wild originally breeding herself with a dragon and she seems to give shiny and powerful based stat dragons.
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  • From ANON - randomguy on September 04, 2015
    its interesting in a fuck up way
    can you do Anabel? its ok if you dont
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  • From longlost-potter-twin on August 16, 2015
    Could do a feline or canine Pokemon reasoning in the wild females are rare because they are weaker then their male counterparts so they are trying to bring up the female pop
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  • From ANON - Cana on August 11, 2015
    Can you do a breeding with ash and her charizard cause they have a larger male ratio
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  • From Joseph_Nathaniel_Spears on August 06, 2015
    Nice chapter you did there... Serena seems to have learned there's no escape from that fate (I think)

    Still, I wanted to see Iris there. I hope you include her anytime soon.

    Anyway, about a darker version of this story... I don't think I can stomach that. Sorry... It's better to keep focusing in this main product IMHO

    See you soon and hope more Pokémon are being "helped" there
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2015
    Now the idea of a breeding story with the other girls seem ok, but this is already pretty dark. Why not focus on a breeding story where the men are farmed out for their baby batter?
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