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Reviews for Sex Booth 433

By : SluttyHaruka
  • From ninesenshi on October 20, 2019

    Vary dark, but sexy.  Would like to read more, especially with breeding


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  • From Donglibog on October 25, 2017

    I know this review is 2 years late but I hope you still read it, because I really enjoyed your story. You have an excellent way with words, and the scenes were described in amazing detail. Carl and the fat bastard were very interesting opposing characters, also.


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  • From Matt01 on May 04, 2015
    Hi.

    You have a good book and concept overall. But what is the biggest letdown is how disjointed the story is.

    There is very little backstory and the actual storytelling is done in such a way where it doesn't flow and is extremely confusing.

    Like I have said, it's a good idea and concept, but the way the story is disjointed and confusion, is its biggest letdown.

    I hope this review can help you be a better writer.
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