Reviews for Once Unloved

BY : Umari

  • From ANON - That over guy on October 14, 2015

    Usually I put jokes and stuff in reviews, but here's a more honest one.
    I enjoyed the story. It was well written, and I thought that the idea was great.
    The story had a few minor typos and repeats, one that I found was:
    "Oh, well, whatever it is, you may go ahead. If it'll make you happy, then go ahead."
    But that did not prevent me from likeing the story. Well done.
    Also that was one... Hot dog...
    Shit, more serious, sorry... I'll show myself out ( -_-)
    Have a good one!

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