Reviews for Kari\'s Gift

BY : Talonias


  • From NaPenme on June 24, 2017

    It's been long enough since you updated I don't know if  you'll see this, but I really like the pacing of this fic.

    Normally in a fic like this a blowjob would be the first "test" and there would be anal by the end of the first night, but instead you had them push slower.  The pair pushed their boundaries up one by one, exploring fetishes slowly and it paid off. 

    Plus the characterization is good too, Kari's quiet humiliation, TK's split between trying to be a gentleman and trying to enjoy the moment.  Sora's brazen attitude toward the whole thing. (and I can't help but notice she never actually put out an end point on being TK's slave).

    I am eager to see what comes next.



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  • From ANON - pettrum on January 27, 2017

    I'd love to see this finished!



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  • From ANON - DK12 on May 20, 2016

    I like the story, but just that I hate TK/Kari as a pairing, but the writing itself is excellent. I hope you can do more stories like this. Do you take requests by any chance?

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  • From ANON - gaiatron on April 15, 2016

    Yeah this is good! please write more!

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  • From Harem-Lover-26 on April 13, 2016

    More please. THANKS and Kari is one of my favorite pairings. I want to see how far depraved TO is going to get and how far he's going to push Kari, and just who the third person is going to be. If I can make a request could you do a similar story with Takato and Jeri.

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