Reviews for Ai o JūtenBy : pip |
When - are - you - going - to - update! I'm dying here!
You know, I have always wondered what it would be like for a cyborg to experience human sensations, human drives so deeply ingrained in the psyche they cannot be programmed away. You have shown me with astonishing clarity how it would feel, and I'm absolutely breathless with awe.
Iason's cruelty is simply what he is, who he is, as impersonal as the rain. Riki is indeed the polar opposite, his anger and sarcasm the byproduct of his loneliness and desire to be loved. But in this moment, Riki has indeed changed Iason. Whether or not it's for the better will remain to be seen. I have no illusions Iason will stop being cruel. He might learn to mean it, though.
Love it! Love it! Love it! I can hardly wait for more. Please update soon!
Ah, poor Riki. He is simply over his head right now, isn't he? Iason has all the cards, and isn't afraid to use them, and Riki is far too interesting, and stimulating.
I did feel for Daryl in this chapter, torn between needing to obey Iason, and his sympathetic handling of Riki. I was quite ready to believe Daryl did have Riki's interests at heart when he soothed him afterward. But, you know, that could just be my desperate bid to put a kinder face on it all.
And of course, this is only the beginning, so Riki has far to go.
Just superb, as always! :D
L-O-V-E IT! Please write more and update quicker. :)
Great chapter! Please update as soon as possible.
Riki is very stubborn--very human, and I do enjoy Iason's confusion over Riki's refusal to see how his lot in life has improved. I suspect the android will have nearly as much trouble accepting Riki's constant rebellion as Riki will have accepting Iason's touch. It's a good thing Iason likes problems which require a great deal of thought to resolve... :D
Lovely chapter!
I love it! Please update soon.
What a grim and terrible world this is, and yet I am drawn in by the superb characterisation. Without knowing this manga, I am still beguiled and held captive by the perfect cruelty and delicate brutality of Riki's situation. Iason is so in control, but he's already giving small hints of the tiny cracks in his perfect facade.
I will definitely follow this one, every dark step of the way. Brava!
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