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BronxWench,

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hi great to here the next chapter coming out prehaps its time for asuka to find out she's pregnant maybe with ritsuko taking advantage of the situation

I do like these kinds of NTR stories, and I have a bunch of other ideas for evangelion stories like them if you are interested in starting another story. I don't really have an email address to contact you with though and it has been a while since I have been on Adult fanfiction so I don't know if they have private messages or anything like that. On the subject of AFF net, you should consider also posting on other sites like Hentai Foundry, as it might give you more views. I don't know about HF guidelines, but most of the stuff in this story would probably be alright on that site and it would be a good place if you ever want to start a new story.

I don't mind the drugs but I don't really like the idea of Asuka being trapped in a filthy crack house, it feels to dirty and kind of real. Maybe you can have her escape after a guy shows her his huge cock and states that he want her ass which scares her into getting the hell out of there. But she comes back when she is looking for a fix of drugs, only the price is her taking that big cock in her ass, which she does willingly and maybe with a bit of twerking too.

Let me get this straight. He finds out she's an Eva pilot, and rather than do the sensible thing and apologize like fuck and hope it buys him time to disappear he... beats the holy living shit out of her and demands she go back to NERV and tell them she's leaving them for him? How does he think they're going to respond to this news? How will Gendo react?

If Asuka doesn't end up going back in Eva 02 and stepping on him, or 01 doesn't literally eat him, or Misato doesn't shoot him, or NERV agents don't simply shoot him or blow up his home and / or business and / or car with him in it, then he's REALLY in trouble because that means Gendo wants him captured alive. Poor fucker will probably end up in some chamber somewhere exposed to psychic emanations from a chunk of brain tissue cloned from an Angel and kept continually electrocuted so that it sends overwhelming waves of horror and pain and confusion and pain and pain and pain. And he will remain there, probably limbless and castrated hung on a wall with a catheter, colostomy tube and feeding tubes forcing him to remain alive and suffer day after day, week after week, month after month, year after year until his heart finally and mercifully explodes.

Finally! not much, but something.

The little bitch finally got put into her place.

Drugging her is not my coup of tea, but it's your story, can't wait to see her degrading.

Great story soo far looking forward to how Asuka getting pregnant will play out

Dude, This is some properly written shit. Really like it.

It seems the little whore quite like pain. What kind of piercing she got in her nipples? How she like the pain during the process? There is a possible route for her to became a proper painslut, who can get high on pain. Maybe a cute little ring in her clitoris later as a treat? Stretching out her cute little holes? Your work is so promising so far!

Yupp, I don't like drugs, but as you said it's your story, so this is how it is.

Where is Blue? Maybe she'll join later, when she face Asuka, and try to talk her out of this lifestile, just to get caught, and end in the same trap of pleasure and slavery.

Keep up the good work pal, and give us more soon!

Chap5, I hope we get back to Misato.  Im more interested in her at this point.

Chap4, was fun but I would have liked  a lot more detail on the encounter with Misato.

Ok this is going to dark places i can get behind!

Good stuff, looking forward to more

ok this is shaping up to be pretty nice, i like i lile.