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Reviews for Apprentice

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  • From ANON - me on October 05, 2005
    aww plaese updatee soon

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  • From ANON - hatorisohma on December 08, 2003
    Great story so far. I absolutely love your descriptive passages, you have a great feel for the characters and I like the way you've built up a foundation for the story. Great work. You are a talented writer. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - MomOfFluffyAndFluffier on September 25, 2003
    this is a great story, hope to see more of it soon.
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  • From ANON - keket on August 18, 2003
    I really like Under the Glass Moon and this story is very interesting. I hope to read more chapters of this story. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - S.M. on August 07, 2003
    please update as soon as possible,can't wait to read more
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  • From ANON - danielle on July 25, 2003
    i have read Under the glass moon i love it...its a very well written and luel is so hot ''' ~drools~ but anyway ...I enjyoed writing this i just hope The neice doesnt steal Luel from Nell i always wanted them to be together they make the perfect couple i will countine to read along so write some more ! please i really enjoy this manga alot and i hope to write something her soon about them so see you soon hoping to read more ^^
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  • From ANON - Ai Fujimiya on July 06, 2003
    It's really good so far!! The only thing i'd do is to go back and make it a little easier to read (i.e. Make new paragraphs and dialoge easier to read) and grammer check. (You need commas). MWAH! Write more!
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