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Reviews for Crawford\'s Slave

By : pinkwhirlwind
  • From PsiberZombie on August 08, 2007
    You've got some words that don't really make sense in there. I'm not sure if they're typos or what, but they really pull the reader out of the story.

    I really like the story so far and the mythology, but... Youji seems wildly OOC.

    I can't wait for more. I'd like to see where you take this.
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  • From ANON - Talyssa on November 30, 2003
    ::whimper::
    ::poke::
    where's the rest? @_@ there's more right? right?
    I think that what the world needs now is some more loverly kinkerly smut
    Yesh. Get crackin!
    ^_^; seriously though, its just cruel to leave it there.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 10, 2003
    Wow! Great fic, can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - rietrietrail on September 24, 2003
    mam what a great story! i hope you are still working on it .i'm looking forward to seeing what well happen next.you have me on pins and needles now.what a way to end the stroy that is so frustrating!
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