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By : DarkPenguin
  • From InvaderPichu on July 17, 2005
    Thanks for making me cum.

    Seriously though, this is the best OP lemon thing I've read so far. o.o;
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  • From ANON - anne on July 02, 2005
    sweet!! you finally finished it! oh, the joy, you have no idea. and luffy dearest stayed in character!!! amazing.
    just a couple things... you might wanna go through a couple times, just read it and edit a little more. i found repeated, incomplete words a couple times, and words stuck together, i.e. "weroppiopping", and one 'right word, wrong spelling' that broke the mood in the flashback deck scene (waste should be waist... cause, yeah, yuck.) but overall, it r0xx0red and i heart this story to death. i can't wait to see more of your work!! XD
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  • From ANON - Enula on June 27, 2005
    This is the second time I read this story. It got better!...somehow. This is definitely an awesome story and was able to satisfy that certain need for Nami/Luffy fics. You did a great job in capturing their characters. I'm not sure if Luffy would be so bold, but no one knows how he would be in that sitation! That would be hot if he was that bold. But besides his boldness in those situations, you still had him be his funny, unknowing yet knowing self. If that made sense. He had me laughing, so Luffy was Luffy. Nami was also being her normal often smart-alec self. To sum this review up, this is my favorite One Piece fanfic by far. I'll probably be back to reading some other time. It's worth it.
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  • From ANON - plastic 586 on May 30, 2005
    sweet
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  • From ANON - Erica on May 28, 2005
    This was a great story. Even though I have no idea who these characters are, I could still get into it. Your sexual scenes were great and I loved how you took time to describe the kissing in the first chapter since that act is so important but many people completely glaze over it.
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  • From ANON - Butterfly1 on May 27, 2005
    Love your fics!!
    This one is really great!
    You characterized them so well!!!
    Hope to read more Luffy/Nami from you!!!
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  • From manipulate on May 26, 2005
    I liked it, some deep such nice words. this is my tue opinion. I didn't read the last one but I like this one it's like pofessinal to me. I give it a thumbs and fingers up.
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  • From LuminousBlane on May 25, 2005
    Chapter 2=great.
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  • From LuminousBlane on May 25, 2005
    EXCELLENT! Bravo! One chapter down, now to read the rest! Very well done!
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  • From Mic123 on May 16, 2005
    Very good, although you need to go back and re-wright some sections that are somewhat unreadable eather by wording or dubble words where there shuldent be, kinda things, but very good all in all
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  • From ANON - aneededgurl on March 14, 2005
    man this story is good!!! And YUMMY!!!!! *thinks perverted thoughts...*
    well ya it's good!!! Update soon!!! I wanna read more!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - clutsy_angel on March 07, 2005
    Oh woOoooW!! This is a really good story!! Love it!! You have to update soon!! Well just e-mail me if u do update soon!! I wanna know what happens next!! Update soon please and keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Jeff on February 27, 2005
    Interesting, by the wau what Luffy did to Sanji in the first chapter was freaking hilarious, also it was way in character. That is totally something Luffy would do.
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  • From YamisAkuchan on February 18, 2005
    hey, i really like this, i read it before you rewrote it... i thought it was great then too. I am not a fan of Luffy and Nami I like Zoro and Nami better but this is good! Please update I swear just pleas do it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 06, 2005
    You Are taking your sweet time!!!!! Hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry !!!!
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