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Reviews for I Hate Him

By : animegher
  • From ANON - nozomi on May 28, 2004
    I'm glad they finally hooked up, even if aya has no idea how he feels about the whole thing...

    and i can't believe that little twist! Aya-chan using the money for herself....selfish bitch! Poor Aya-kun! I wanted to cry when i read that part!

    This is so good!
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  • From ANON - lisa on May 26, 2004
    Hi! ^^ my best pal Ri told me of this fic, and I'm a major fan for the couple (like scary major, lol) I luv it, its fucking fantastic, sweet and *yay* Dunno if Aya would ever let this happen to him, but ~yay fanfics!! Was in total "my world is the suckiest world ever" mode, and read this, fuckin' cheered me up more than Foamy!!! & totally Gackt-licious *heart*

    laterz, soz if i seem a little spazzy, haven't slept in ages and spent all night reading this....damn sun...with the shining XP
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  • From ANON - Mikarin on May 26, 2004
    I have opted to read everything without commenting on anything until I could see the end of this story, mainly because I wanted to see how far it spanned and how it ended.
    I absolutely love this story.
    Not so much the direction of the story but the writing. Skip a few grammar and misspelling mistakes, we all make them.
    Kudos, you write well.
    It's not the kind of story I normally read. When I realized Aya was so broken and in such a way after being a professional assassin. I had a hard time. The traits of his personality should not have allowed this to happen. Hard as nails, ice princess, always a professional, emotionally frigid in the outside, 'killer' instincts.
    But well,... at the end he gets that so needed confidence back that he so lacked. I'm so happy for that. He needed that bust. and Yohgi was able to provide that in a way. I was beginning to get tired of his whippiness. He may not be able to lift his sword but he still has plenty of brains left. Lamp cord around someone's neck while using the ripped end off the lamp, still plugged to electrocute another. Three months don't seem like enough time to break a person like Aya. He's a fighter, he should've lasted longer.
    Nevertheless, I really do 'like' this story.
    My favorite parts have to be the Yohgi's killing spree. it was beautiful--syncizedized; my second favorite, Yohgi to the rescue, the way he simple bolted out the door and raced plunging against the limo and beat the baddies. I really liked that you left it to the imagination of the reader from Aya's limited view ahd hearing. And my third favorite, the dance floor massacre, I could see it in my head.
    Good use of Ken and Omi as sex kittens.
    For someone who really like the lemons with purpose or not. I liked the sexual cliffhanger. It leaves much to the imagination and also open to sequel.

    Good work.

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  • From ANON - KSS on May 21, 2004
    First of all.. I want to say that it's been a while since a story has captivated me so. Nice work, I love reading it! I especially loved the Youji-Battle-Mode scene. I'm such a sucker for violence. *smile* The way you write Aya and Youji together is so emotional! It's addicting, you know!!
    Second, when typing in a word-processing program (like Word or Appleworks) a lot of the time some of the symbols get screwed up (like the ' " etc) I think that might be your problem. The best solution is, if you're going to end up saving as a .txt, to type it in a text-based program like Notepad or TextEdit. You don't get any of the nice features, but it saves a bit of hassle in formatting.
    ...Or just sucker a kind person into beta-reading :) I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - nozomi on May 19, 2004
    hey, I'm a girl too, and i know from experience. it takes time to get used to the idea of blow jobs, but once you get used to it, it's not that bad. it can actually be rather fun ^_^
    *cough*ahem.. anyway....
    This story is great, 200%. I hope you update it soon, and i love the 'commercial breaks' ^_^ gotta have a little fun between all the angst and gore, etc.
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  • From ANON - Amanda on May 18, 2004
    I read this in its entirety a while ago somewhere else, and when I came here and saw it up, I read the first part again :) It's still awesome :)
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  • From ANON - Emerae on May 14, 2004
    I love this story!!! Please continue!!!
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  • From ANON - laughingwolfgirl on April 24, 2004
    This was wrenching to read, all the emotions going through them, but ooh so good. Keep up the good work! and can't wait to read more of this. *GriN*
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  • From ANON - yamitsuki on May 05, 2003
    ooohh! You have to continue!! That was really godd, but sad. I almost started crying, poor Aya-kun. Anyways, please write the next chapter... if you on on writing a next chapter, if you don't I suggest you do, I hope you do. Ja Ne.
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  • From ANON - wanling on April 05, 2003
    hey! you have to finish this... it's got too much potential to be wasted away... i want to see a youji/aya or aya/youji! =]=]
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  • From ANON - The Falcon on February 09, 2003
    Oh my Goddess! Hun, you have to write more on this! You can't just leave it hanging like that! What happens!!!! Please, oh please write!
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  • From ANON - Miko No Hoshi on December 13, 2002
    I don't know how many places I've reviewed this now, but its worth every one. You do excellent work and this story is one of my favorite Yohji/Aya ones, its very realistic and very emotional. Nice work.

    Her Supreme Omni-potence,
    Miko No Hoshi
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