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From ANON - Anon on June 02, 2009
Hi!

Well, I know that you finished the fanfic "I hate him" years ago, but IŽm quite new to English Weiss Kreuz fanfictions so i just stumbled over it a month ago. I enjoyed the story so much that I just had to write you a review, so here it is ^.~

First of all, your style of writing is absolutely great! I found myself addicted to the story, I just couldnŽt stop myself from reading and I was totally into the characters. I sat in front of my PC and thought things like "oh no, please donŽt let Aya be raped again" and "yes Yohji, go and comfort him" and so on... I was really worried about Aya and this is quite strange because heŽs just a fictional character. But thanks to your great style of writing and thanks to the very realistic descriptions the characters were really vivid to me.
I feel so sorry for Aya, he really suffered through horrible things. You wrote him very, very bitchy and cold, but I think thatŽs okay. AyaŽs always been cold and distant and after being used and raped itŽs only natural for him to close up even more. I especially liked his panic attacks... uhm, that sounds strange. I mean I like it that you thought of them because being raped really is traumatizing and these attacks showed how mentally damaged Aya was by this. But fortunately Yohji is there to comfort him... at least he tries ^.~
Yohji was a bit difficult to get along with for me... In the beginning I didnŽt quite like him because he acted so angry towards Aya. I sometimes thought he overreacted a bit but then it got better because he really cares for Aya. So now I really really like him, especially his behaviour against Sebastian^^
Ken and Omi are sweet, too, theyŽre just totally in love... *gets jealous*
But anyways, you didnŽt only have great characterisations but a great plot, too. The story was really fascinating to read, I especially liked the Aya-chan/Ran part because I somehow can understand Aya-chan, too. Of course she somehow became a spoiled brat, but at the same time she is caring and she really had good intentions. I somehow want to blame everything bad she did on Sebastian... *really dislikes him* And Aya-chan didnŽt know what Ran/Aya went through to get all this money. Okay, she should have asked and rejected it, but after all she just is a very young woman who never suffered that much like her brother and sheŽs still too trusting and naive. okay, maybe I just like her too much to get an neutral opinion ^.~

So, thanks for writing such a wonderful story! Oh, and you have got a quite high standard when it comes to grammar, spelling and language, I really liked that (although it meant I had to use my dictionary from time to time ^^).

Uhm, and IŽm very sorry because this review might sound strange and clumsy, IŽm actually German oO

Bye,
Layla
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From on September 17, 2007
I have a mixed feeling about this story. On the one hand I really like it, you have a great style, on the other - I was so pissed while reading it. It's about how Aya is acting here. He is such a pathetic weak whore, self-concerned, annoying, and I want to kill him. Nah seriously, I think that this fic is a great prize for people with Aya-obssesion. I am Omi fan so I keep reading only for these sweet Ken/Omi moments. Sad thing, even their relationship was affected by Aya-centre-of-the-world persona. Omi's crying because he is worried about Aya - Ken needs to make him feel better, Omi's crying because Aya was mean to him - Ken needs to make him feel better, (I will jump on the sequel now) Ken and Omi can't have sex because Aya thinks he can hit his boyfriend whatever he feels like it and when Yohji's going out he thinks he has the right to bother Ken and Omi with his self-pity. I understand that poor Aya has a trauma, but I am wondering why Yohji is with him... I don't know what is it to love here, probably only Aya's body. What Yohji gets from this relationship is being hitting (and of course he won't hit Aya back, nevermind that Aya was his teammate, assassin as well, and MAN, now he is a weak whore, more like a woman too, and hitting women is bad), he is being treatened because he said something that princess Aya didn't like ("you're childlish" if I remember properly)... I could go and go with criticize him, but I will only add that Aya's suicide was the best drama queen stunt here, running into bathroom after talking with your boyfriend, with two other friends in the house... it seems that Aya was feeling to left out since nobody was kidnapping him, raping him, forcing him into the blow job, or meddling him into stupid bike race (of course Aya couldn't say "fuck off, morons, I won't kiss any of you" because he would lost a great reason to self-pity himself, blame Ken, and being a bitch to everybody *nod**nod*). Okey, I will end my rambling, just wanted to say one more that I think you're a great author, I am not attacking you, or not even your fic, the plot idea is really interesting, the story is realistic, it just... you know what:D Bai
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From ANON - Talia on January 10, 2007
pLEASE, CAN SEBASTIEN DIE? PRETTY PLEASE?
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From ANON - Katzchen on April 27, 2005
I just wanted to say that you story has been amazing..I remember when it was first starting and now it is ended. I have been sick and reading every little chapter while laying on the couch with my box-o-tissues..If you ever wanna drop me a ling **wink wink wink** then the sn is Illgottenspawn on aim..please yell at meh or something! Or maybe I will get to ya first!

LATER!

KaT

ps* yes that is my real name
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From ANON - Lily on April 23, 2005
Hi, have just spent the last two days reading your wonderful story, but I guess it will take me that long if I only start reading it once theres 20 chapters. I think your depiction of Aya's mental state is probably very accurate and I felt so bad for him, and I think it was really good how you didnt wave a magical wand and suddenly cure him of all his angst. Oh yeah Sebastian, I really hated him and aya-chan actually but anyway love the english 'chum' and 'bloke'. I'm english and I dont actually think I have ever heard anyone say chum, except on tv ;) We say 'bugger' and 'bloody' alot tho, I digress. So what I wanted to say was that I really love your writing, your obv a very talented writer, so thanks for a great story, and now I'm going to start on the follow up story :)
Lily
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From ANON - juna on April 20, 2005
It was simply gorgeous! I loved it to the very end! You did a wonderful job! Ooooh a sequel!? That would be great...but I have n ideas... T_T I'm not real good when it comes to writing fics. I hope you do write a sequel though! Great job! *hugs* Thank you once again for sharing your wonderful fic with all of us! ^________________________^
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From ANON - Ri on April 19, 2005
ah where is the final chapter!?! Please please you must finish this hot story! I can't wait to read more of it! Great job!
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From ANON - lady_kail on March 12, 2005
Awwwwww! That was beautiful!
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From ANON - lady_kail on March 07, 2005
Can we please get rid of Aya-chan! Gods, you've made her so annoying!

Better yet, have Yohji kill her slowly. the stupid bint.

by the way, good work. I love how this is developing. :-D
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From ANON - lady_kail on March 05, 2005
Oh wow! Oh wow! Oh wow!

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From aimless38 on March 02, 2005
Incredibly riveting story dear. Full of angst and strong emotion. It kept me reading enthralled to the very end. Wonderful job with my favorite pairings.

Oh and to the reviewer that commented on the bad grammar. It is not the author. AFFN had some problems a while back and had to overhaul the site which messed with the formatting on a lot of the stories over 6 months old. It chopped some of the words off and took out a lot of the spacing. Check the older stories and you will see it on most of them unless the author came back in and fixed it. So before you complain about the author�s grammar get your facts straight.

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From ANON - bunny on March 02, 2005
oh my GOD!! you have the WORST GRAMMAR SKILLS I HAVE EVER SEEN IN MY ENTIRE LIFE!!!! Have you ever heard of a BETA READER???????? do you have any idea how many mistakes are in your chapters? in just about every sentance there is a word that you like....start typing and forget about or that you start typing and then start the word over again without erasing the first part! its REAAAAAALLLLLLLY a shame that the grammar is so messed up because your story is one of the most detailed, well thought out angst fics ive ever read....and it would get a 100 out of 10 from me if you just paid a bit more attention to what you're typing...
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From ANON - Flamingolo on November 08, 2004
Okay, so I'm getting in way too late his his lovely ficcie. Great, great job, as to be expected. I'm holding you personally accountable for getting me all fan-girl gushy over Weiss; after reading "Never No Answer", I couldn't possible turn down the opp to read another animeghir *grins*, even though I hadn't seen the anime. I'm also sending you the bill for forcing me to purchase the series, you evil creature, you. Anyway, this was an engrossing fic, the story just sucked me in, and I found myself reading for several hours straight and avoiding any human contact (again, I blame you). I was shocked to see that this was your first fanfic; each chapter I read was better than the one before. I particularly liked what you did with Aya, keeping the complexity of his character even as he softened toward Yohji realistically. For me, there's nothing worse than reading a fic where a character swoons head-over-heels out of nowhere, and just becomes a different person. You managed to put both main couples together very realistically. As much as I enjoy pointless smut, it's so much more enjoyable to see such dimension brought to the characters, as you've done. Lovely job *runs off to read the cont*.
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From ANON - Emerae on June 12, 2004
WOW! That was awesome! ^_^ I loved the way you wrote the characters, very very real, and very much like their anime/manga personalities. You have a certain flair for words! VERY VERY VERY good. I can't say that enough. Novel full of smut or no, it was an AWESOME novel full of smut!
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From ANON - Lychee on June 10, 2004
Oh dear god! Can we please just kill Aya-chan? And Sebastion too. Him because he is such a feckin' low-life, scum-sucking piece of crap,/i>, her because she's got to be the most irritating, obnoxious, self-centered twit on the planet! Argh!! This is one of those stories that's like a train wreck; I don't want to look but I'm totally rubbernecking here. I get tired reading this. Emotionally wearo ono one should have to go through what Aya(Ran) did. And Yohji too. He's just as emotionally beat up now as Aya. I just want everyone to be healthy and happy *sniffs*. Except for Sebastion and Aya-chan. They should be covered in honey and staked to an anthill.
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