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Reviews for Venus and Jupiter in Love!

By : SailorLita18
  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2006
    Love the story so far. Will you update it?
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  • From ANON - Black Haired Demon on October 11, 2004
    YES! I agree there's got to come more of this ^_^
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  • From ANON - Cookie Monster on May 13, 2004
    Dear Authoress,

    While I'm glad to have seen you're embracing the loveliness and steaminess of Yuri, your fic seems to have a few inaccuracies when it comes to female/female sex. I can point these out to you, but I encourage research.. I think one of the big ones is the depiction of the orgasm.. very fake. *Nods* Now, this isn't a flame! I don't flame! But I was just thinking..you should take your time with sex scenes and draw them out longer. Oh, and my friend says "Please do not write sex if all you know about it comes from other bad fanfiction." Ahem.. she said it! Not me! Goodluck on future lemons! Continue with Yuri-ness!
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  • From ANON - LS (lightningstrikes) on February 28, 2004
    you write yuri?? And you post here?? freeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaky
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  • From ANON - shinyquarter on December 09, 2003
    "vigina"? try again when you find the spell check button. You have the right idea, but I think you need some real-life practice to know exactly what was wrong in this ficlet.
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