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Reviews for Lodoss Unlimited

By : Kenta132
  • From ANON - Gemini on March 28, 2005
    Update, Update, Update!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Simmerl on January 11, 2004
    Hm ... not much to review, for now.
    Please make paragraphs for the next chapter, it is much easier to read then.
    Anyway, it sure looks promising - I'll give it a 3/5 for now and you try harder for the next chapter. A bit more plot, a little longer, and it'll be alright.
    PERSONALLY, I think, some Deedlit/Pirotess wouldn't hurt either, but ... -_-;;
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  • From ANON - Miroku2 on December 25, 2003
    Dear Readers,
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  • From ANON - Hakuryuu on December 11, 2003
    Hey!

    First thing: the format is a little confuzing to read, so I'd try spacing it out and making clear who the speaker is.

    Second: (just a harmless question, cuz I don't remember this from the anime/manga) is the Windurst you speak of from FFX1, or was it truely in the manga? Heh it's been a LONG time...

    Anyway, nice start to your story! If you need a beta readeleaslease feel free to email me! ;) I'd be happy to help.
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