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Reviews for Invading Emotions

By : Toruko
  • From ANON - anon on April 02, 2005
    I liked it a lot ^^. There was so much description, emotion, and ahh...it was just written so well; though there were quite a few spelling errors in which I suggest you correct and look out for in future chapters. I do hope you continue...please, soon.
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  • From ANON - Maazka on November 01, 2004
    WAHHHH!!!! u need to finish!! *cries* will hisoka be ok. is the lemon gonna be sicke flu fluffy or not?... so many questions so little text!!!!
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  • From ANON - lady sesshomaru on March 20, 2004
    WHY'DE YOU STOP THERE YOU BIG MEANIE...you should write more
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  • From ANON - Vampy-chan on February 29, 2004
    A lovely little piece of writing here. Very evocative, the emotion is very sharp and... vibrating. Please, please, PLEASE write it into a lemon! PLEASE! Good porn is so hard to come by....... >.>; And this is really good! With porn potential!
    *ahem* Yes, well, good job, and keep it up, ne?
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  • From ANON - Savvie on February 09, 2004
    Aww...poor Hisoka...and Tsuzuki too for that matter :(
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  • From ANON - B on January 22, 2004
    Oh yes! You should deffy continue with this, It's such a good start!!
    You really should continue with it :D

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  • From ANON - miraphora on January 12, 2004
    I'd like to see it longer, definitely. It's a good start with the interaction b/t Tsuzuki and Hisoka, even if I don't really think Tsuzuki would force his emotions on Hisoka like that. Then again, a frustrated Tsuzuki who doesn't know how else to break through his partner's no-touchy shell might resort to underhand tactics... Well, no, I still don't see it, but you could definitely argue that angle, and I'm always willing to read well-written Yami fics, so keep going. Length and depth of plot can only improve it. I like the way you've managed to capture some of what fangirls love about their interaction--Soka's hidden smile, Tsuzuki's teasing 'cute' observation, Soka chiding Tsuzfor for being a glutton. We *love* the fluffy Tsusoka. ^^ So...more, onegai shimasu. Suki desu.
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  • From ANON - Anna on January 11, 2004
    I know this will be no more than a fangirl squee, but I can't help it and I *must* let you know that ...

    OMG!!!1111 I LOVE TIHS STORY IT'S SO GOOD!!!!!ONEONE
    LIEK, TSU/SOKP!!!P!!!!!!1ONEONEONE111 PLEASE RITE MORE!!!!

    kthnxbai.

    p.s.: ;) I'm serious, though. I loved it. Please, continue.
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  • From ANON - Anya on December 23, 2003
    Fluffy so far but not bad at all.
    So, when's next???? ^.^
    Best Wishes. XD
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  • From ANON - Katsue on December 23, 2003
    I *really* like this beginning, and I'd love it if you turned it into a fic!!
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