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Reviews for Some weird shit\'s been going on!

By : yugixdmg
  • From ANON - Star MAge on December 30, 2003
    LOve the story hope you update soon. very orignal i think and a very good start
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  • From BigGator5 on December 30, 2003
    I wouldn't go as far to say that no one has ever tried out this idea(I thought I saw one story on FF.net before the NC-17 stories disappeaer), but I wouldn't be surprize if ya' did nor will I would be surprize if other stories are writen like this as well.

    In fact, it has already happen over in the "X-Men: E" section. Someone wrote a story around Jamie, and almost 6 stories with him in them starting to show up.

    Oh, thank you for cleaning up the story! Looks much better!
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  • From ANON - Locke of the Watch on December 29, 2003
    Great fic, in my opinion, and that is one heck of a new idea for a pokemon fan fiction. Too bad that now some people will rip off your idea. 'Raises a cup of sake' Heres to the hope that you will always get full credit on this new idea.
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  • From ANON - sTuNtMaN on December 28, 2003
    I wouldn't think Ash's mom would be that inconsideret. Well, as long as she understands what's happened. I hope no one else makes that mistake(however you spell it).
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  • From ANON - Pana453 on December 28, 2003
    Cool! Write more!
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  • From ANON - ....... on December 28, 2003
    I'm not much for words so I'll just say very interesten. I've never read a fic with a poke'mon turning into a human. A new idea, we always need more of those.
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  • From Tourach on December 27, 2003
    Nice Fic, well done.
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  • From yugixdmg on December 27, 2003
    Oh and by the way. I fixed the fucking Italics. It wasn't my fault really. I posted this story normal and it became italics. Well Its fixed people.
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  • From yugixdmg on December 27, 2003
    He he he. I didn't know my work actually rocked. Well you peeps will see another chapter in when I get back from vacation. "It's darn near close to blackmail" If I had
    known this I wouldn't have set up the 10 reviews. Well when I come back I will update.
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  • From BigGator5 on December 27, 2003
    That whole being in italics is really annoying! I would get a beta if I was you and I would be more than happy to be your beta.
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  • From ANON - MelanthaNocturne on December 27, 2003
    I like the plot, but the fact that it was all in italics bothered me. Also, you might want to brush up on the grammar thing. Also also, pe doe don't be a review whore, it's annoying.

    I like Maganium, but she's maybe a little too human-savvy for a pokemon...that's just me though. I like the whole premise of pokemorphs but maybe she should cute/naive him into the sex... again, just my opinion.

    A piece of advice one of my writing teachers told me: Don't use pop-culture references, they distract the reader and interrupt the mood of the story. I know, I've used them a couple times when I had just started writing and my friends (who were my critics) mentioned that they didn't like it.

    I like that the thoughts are in parentheses, that's very unique, but again, the grammar thing. You might want to read some stuff, like novels and stuff, it really helps in writing to read.

    Anyway, I'm sorry if I sound lecture-y, just trying to help ^_^'

    ~Melantha
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  • From ANON - Zerotenchi on December 26, 2003
    That is crule and darn close to blackmail, but overall it is a decent fic as a beginning. You might want to cons sav saving the use of italics for things like only thoughts, only direct speaking, or narattion and not using it for all of the text.
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  • From ANON - Amber on December 26, 2003
    LOL I like this story idea. A pokemon evolving into a human is a neat concept. I hope you post more because I wanna find out what happens next.
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