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Reviews for The Devil Wears a Pinstriped Suit

By : Sosoru
  • From ANON - luv_hyde on October 17, 2004
    I think that your fanfiction, "The Devil Wears a Pinstriped Suit" is very excellent! I almost jumped out of my chair everytime I thought Kenshin was going to get caught by his wife! I think that the time and effort u put into writing this fanfiction was very well spent. XD-luv_hyde.
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  • From ANON - kao on August 07, 2004
    wow, that was nice , kaorus vocabulary is amazing, you know , but, apart from taht , the sarcasm on every wor she speaks is what i like about this fic, the case is turning interesting, even if the k/k relathiophiop is the main topic of the story and how both of them deal with it (and even if i was willing to hear kenshin saying i love u to kaoru again and see her reaction once more) the trial is capturing my attntion too, so hope to get more updates soon , the fic is going great by the way, id just sugest one litle thing that is my own opinion and if you want to go on with your fic as it is i will still read it eagerlylol, however, my piece of advise is this: avoid writing in the present tense, it just ruins slightly a very good piece pf work, but if u like it and if its good for the swapping of narrators then go on with it , ah , by the way ., that changing from one narrator to kaoru herself telling tthe story is reat hehee well , hope to get an update soon , luck
    kao!
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  • From ANON - twishinky on August 05, 2004
    as usual, you leave in annoyingly nail biting suspense... I think we all as fanfic writers are hit with the "Cliffie-ngi-itis" virus. Update soon!!! Keep it up! :)
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  • From Elysant on July 01, 2004
    Just had to write this in here somewhere - LOVE THIS STORY! can't get enough of it >.< I swear lol I guess I am a small Hentai like everyone else :P haha~ Keep up the good work :) once again - loving it :)
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  • From ANON - plex on June 27, 2004
    what the hell took you sooooooooooo long?i thought that you were dead!dont do this again please!anyway the chapter was great!update sooooon
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  • From ANON - Lil me me on June 09, 2004
    Wow good story, good plot. I like the lemons and i like the emotions, so much flowing and happening. Even though Kauro is a bitch (which i can understand, her being hurt and all in the past. I mean who can blame her!). Kenshin is a wreck too lol. I seriously hope he gets it together with Kauro though, god i never liked Tomoe but can't stop myself for feeling sorry for her :/ Misao and Aoshi - LOVE this little add. You should make one just about them, seriously. I love the way you reflect their personalitys. So much like in the series. Their relationship in this story is like a fresh breeze where (my fav female anime character) kauro is so OOC. Keep updating~ Ja Ne~
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  • From ANON - Lil me me on June 09, 2004
    Wow good story, good plot. I like the lemons and i like the emotions, so much flowing and happening. Even though Kauro is a bitch (which i can understand, her being hurt and all in the past. I mean who can blame her!). Kenshin is a wreck too lol. I seriously hope he gets it together with Kauro though, god i never liked Tomoe but can't stop myself for feeling sorry for her :/ Misao and Aoshi - LOVE this little add. You should make one just about them, seriously. I love the way you reflect their personalitys. So much like in the series. A fresh breeze where (my fav female anime character) kauro is so OOC. Keep updating~ Ja Ne~
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  • From ANON - peppercorn on May 31, 2004
    Kaoru's right. Kenshin's being annoying and clingy and he should make up his mind on what to do already...not that I don't enjoy their tug of war! ^_~
    Hey, it's good to see Kaoru's still in control of herself though. Misao and Aoshi? Never saw much appeal in Misao, but eh. Would it be pushing too far for a Tomoe/Aoshi pairing? Lol!
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  • From ANON - twishinky on May 27, 2004
    Thank you for updating!!!! *blows you a flying kiss* brilliant, like always... I confess I'm really waiting for how everything will turn out :)
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  • From ANON - twishinky on May 27, 2004
    Thank you for upda!!!!!!!! *blows you a flying kiss* brilliant, like always... I confess I'm really waiting for how everything will turn out :)
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  • From rinoa2656 on May 24, 2004
    Hey great story. I rarely read any Kenshin fics but you've got me hooked on yours! I really hope you'll update soon I can't wait to read what her reaction to Kenshins's confession.
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  • From ANON - fanaddict on May 12, 2004
    nooooo.PLEASE HURRY UP WITH IT. i love your work

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  • From ANON - maf on May 03, 2004
    oh my gosh! it's a great story!!! tell me!! when are you going to finish it?!? please please please!!! update quickly!!!
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  • From ANON - crAziy¡¨ y on May 01, 2004
    *falls of chair leg twitches*
    holly hell!!!!!! that was soooo amazing. i just couldn't stop reading. all the chapters are put together wonderfully! This fic is truely something wonderful... please please with a cherry onntop update soon!!!
    *holds up cookie as a bribe*
    ^_^
    Ja Ne
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  • From ANON - The Dish on April 28, 2004
    Awww, I was hoping Aoshi and Tomoe would get together. They're so perfect for each other and look re goo good together...Misao's too feral (hence "weasle girl" lol!)and f-ing annoying. Megumi and Aoshi is good, too.
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