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Reviews for Incompatible

By : Chiruken
  • From ANON - Katori on July 14, 2005
    very good
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on March 31, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Lara on January 08, 2005
    GREAT! Normally I don't like het, but your story is an exception. I wish there were more good stories about Knives out there...
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  • From ANON - nutmeg on September 03, 2004
    awwwwww! this was such a great story! It was serious at times too, but still cute, I loved it!
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  • From ANON - puffin on April 08, 2004
    Wow! that was a damn good story!!!!!!!!!! I mean on a scale of 1 to 10 that was 10 easy. I hope any all of your story are just as good. Keep up the good work for furture stories.
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  • From ANON - dvana on February 10, 2004
    Nicely done. You did a really nice job of staying true to the characters, and managed to make knives' conversion intoa believable one--something I wasn't sure, upon watching the series, could be done. Just two things: the use of "had" (as in "had run") can make the voice of a writer sound passive; it's not really necissaf yof you've already established you're talking about pastpast, ie "three days ago."
    Also, the bit about tracking the slavers seemed a bit awkward at parts, almost forced, and the explanation of the confused trail seemed a bit awkward as well. ^_^;; I hope you don't take offense, I really liked this piece. Congrats on finishing something so extensive.
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  • From ANON - Freakish_anime on January 29, 2004
    okay, I haven't read it all yet, but...I love it so far. It's really good. At some point I want top top to the last chapter just to see how it ends, but I don't want to ruin it. Anyway, just sayin it's really good
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on January 24, 2004
    Fabulous last line. I'm gonna just sit here and stare dreamily out in space
    for a few. Oh, and thanks for the story.

    Bye!
    CybrEmly
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  • From ANON - Hi on January 19, 2004

    Hi, UpDaTe SoOn!! I love this story!!! Man..Knives x Meryl Rules!

    Well..Bye!
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on January 17, 2004
    Oh, c'mon, where'd he put it? Tell me! *pouting* C'mon, please?


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  • From ANON - Belle on January 13, 2004
    This is a fantastic fanfic, one of the best I have ever read. I love the way the story is told from Knives point of view. In Trigun I always found Knives the creepiest of villians for the fact he doesn't care that he's a merciless killing machine. This is a great representation of Knives and I actually find myself liking the character. Please keep writing, I'm captivated by it.
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  • From ANON - Megan on January 12, 2004
    That's a really good story. Please write more.
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on January 12, 2004
    I'm all fascinated and stuff. Please do continue.

    I'll be waiting for an update.

    Ja,
    CybrEmly
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  • From ANON - Tsakasa270 on January 12, 2004
    never had a story that made my like Knives more then Vash
    great concept and good way to make this toy sey seem a realistically possible ending
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  • From ANON - Wren on January 09, 2004
    This story is the bomb! I love it. I've been addicted from chapter 1. ^_^
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