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Reviews for Fantasies

By : Melyn
  • From ANON - Mimi-Chan on January 30, 2008
    I love the story, please keep it up. There really aren't enough fics about Nuriko and Hori at all, and you've done a fine job with it. And um... I must say, loving these smut scenes ^///^
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  • From nanashi on January 15, 2007
    maybe it's the pairing, but i think this is my favorite yaoi fic that i have ever read.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on September 14, 2006
    Oh, Suzaku, that was HOT! Write more!
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  • From ANON - Luna on December 19, 2005
    I loved this fic. Im a HxN fan. Can you do a lemon fic of SuboshixAmiboshi. Plz and thank you
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  • From ANON - Melyana on November 27, 2005
    Heeey sweetie. First I'd like to say I'm really glad you did something about the shortage of Hotohori/Nuriko fanfics. You know what I would really like to see, one of them falling in love ^^ It would be really nice hehe *hint*

    I really liked your portrayal of them and it was one fucking hot chapter. I just wanted to give you a piece of advice, first, maybe you should look for a beta. Your writting is good, but there are typing/grammar/punctuation mistakes we writters will never catch on our story even if we read it thousands of times. I do it all the time.

    Second, maybe you should not use their names so much, because it becomes too repetitive. I know from experience how hard it is to find adjectives and things to use when both are male because its just "he did this and he liked it". But there are several things you can use "Younger man, older man, resort to hair color, eye color, skin color, body frame. The larger man, the slender man...you know.

    Well, please continue!
    Hugs.
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on October 21, 2005
    Man, that was good, both chapters. I did like Hotohori and Nuriko as a pair. I also liked that you mentioned Chichiri and Tasuki. I do hope you bring them in as a couple, even though Hotohori and Nuriko are the mains in this one. Good storytelling.
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  • From ANON - Kat on October 20, 2005
    CONTINUE!!!! please!!!
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  • From tehpurplehippo on October 15, 2005
    i can't wait to see what 'Hori has in store. More Please!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sinji on April 08, 2005
    *drooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool*
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  • From ANON - Amaryllis Cage on March 15, 2005
    This was excellent! Thank you for writing this! Suzaku knows there aren't enough HotohorixNuriko fics in existence and this was so kawaii. I just *loved* Nuriko dressing Hotohori as a woman and then Miaka not even recognizing him mwahaha that was delightful. And of course the sex was nice too.
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  • From ANON - Mieaka on August 07, 2004
    That was awesome! You should write more to it, it was really good ^_^




    -Mieaka
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  • From ANON - Inu-chan and Kikyo on August 05, 2004
    WOW That was a great fic! good job with the lemon part! ^_^ Well talk to you later! I can't wait for more chappies!
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  • From ANON - AlesserBeing on May 28, 2004
    Hurrah for Riko/Hori ficcy's! ::giggles::
    You're right...there aren't enough of these out there! *hmmph*
    ...That's why you hafta write more *grins*
    Loved this fic btw^^
    Thanxies!
    ~Alesser*Being~
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  • From ANON - Raverbear351 on May 06, 2004
    I gotta tell you, I couldn't remember what name you were using here, but when I started to read this story, I knew it was you. I mean, nothing says Lester like Tight leather pants, fishnet shirts, Bitch boots, Sparkly "sexy" pin pink shirt, and District 202. Good story, you need to write more!
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  • From ANON - silverblade shi-fox on April 02, 2004
    gyahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *stops to pant* need...more...fantasies...!

    ^_^ seriously, tho... i agree with you on the hotohori/nuriko fiction lack... you'd think that it would be tajorajor yaoi pairing since it's even almost friggin' canon, right? *sigh* don't get me wrong, i love a good tasuki/nuriko too, but then again, that's just 'cuz i love uke!nuriko... *smirkysmirk* *cough* yeah... oh the things my ex and i did to with m'nuri 'n her tasuki... *cackles* but really, i enjoyed this a LOT. fun lemons and just...welll...fun! there's really no other words for it... well except mind-meltingly HOT, but that's beside the point...

    nuriko: *smirk* no, it isn't! it's very much -with- the point! TWO of them, in fact! ^_~.

    ...that was just sad...

    nuriko: *shrugs* yes, well... you haven't had your coffee yet, which means there's a caffeine shortage in here. wake up, bakayarou! *THWAP!!!!!*

    ...itai~i da yo... x_X'''' in any case, i enjoyed the story and had to share the half awake silliness with you because i wasn't awake enough to restrain m'self! ja~a!
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