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Reviews for Deadly Desires

By : scarredbride
  • From ANON - QX3Jasp on January 28, 2004
    yay go Yuuhi, and how will Aki kill Touya i dunno, very good story update soon
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  • From ANON - QX3Jasp on January 27, 2004
    hehehe, when will aki make his move??? lol, the story is very good, update soon
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  • From ANON - Fushigi Wolf on January 27, 2004
    You guys ..er well gals.. are too cool! I really like it. I am trying to keep up with who is who.. I think I have it down now tho..lol. I gotta see this series soon!
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  • From ANON - QX3Jasp on January 23, 2004
    i knew this chappy was here so i left a short one last time and wow i cant wait till aki kills touya well so far it is good and update soon
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  • From ANON - QX3Jasp on January 23, 2004
    hehehehehe cant wait for more, thats all i have to say
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  • From ANON - domingo on January 22, 2004
    man amy the second chap was way better then the first im likeing this fic cant wait to read the third chap from your friend god
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  • From ANON - domingo on January 22, 2004
    man amy this first chap was great you can realy imagine what aki is going threw and how hot aya looks lol anyways great chap going to read number two now
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  • From ANON - Fushigi Wolf on January 22, 2004
    Hiya Amy.. ScarredBride..this is really good! 2 of my favorite authors writing together.. that should be really awesome. I know I haven't seen anything but a few AMV I got an idea on the chracters looks and names, etc. I am so happy I could keep up..lol. Anyway, you 2 are a really good team! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Nan on January 22, 2004
    WOW this fic is goooooooood! I loved it, you guys work good together! Ch. 2 was totally awesome, made me feel like i was watching the anime & reading what was never really said in the anime. Thats a good story!
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  • From ANON - Ailes-Grises on January 22, 2004
    wow. That sure was great start. Maybe it's some stranbsesbsession of mine, but I really like aki/aya/toya fanfics. And yours was one of the best I've read. And I liked that it's not only Mikage that wants her, it's Aki himself, too. That bed-part was kind of sad, even if it really is wrong for aki to do that kind of things to his own sister. He really seems to love her, so I don't even think it as a sister/brother relationship. You described Aki's struggling with his feeling very realistically (is that a word? I hope it is, but I'm not english.....sorry.) but don't rush with aya's emotions. I'm sure she won't fall in love with him the second she knows his feelings. Not that you have done something like that, but oh well..... trying to give some advice here! Even though I'm not writer myself, I always seem to think that people need my advices. I really have to get rid of that habit of mine. But, thanks for the great story, I'm hoping to hear from you soon!
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