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Reviews for Demonic Desires

By : Miko
  • From ANON - enh on April 28, 2005
    good

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  • From ANON - mirune keishiko on March 19, 2004
    well, i'm not at all a vampire kinda fanfic reader, and i never was, and i have to say i started your story completely ignorant that it belonged to exactly that genre... that said, the makings of a very finely crafted, interesting story. and yes, i'm one of those who were surprised (disappointed?) about the identity of the "sweet raven." this seems to me to be shaping up to be one of those really gothic stories with lots of hot-but-brooding (yep, i do believe such a type exists) sex throughout a twisty plot. well, looking forward to it. ^.^
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  • From Lin on March 13, 2004
    Hi, its me again... I just read throuour our reviews... don't listen to the flamers. There is not 'too much angst', you did not 'over use the word ugly', and I didn't see anything about you screwing-up the 'class' issue on MisaoFathFather already being rich but still wanting to marry her off to a rich Lord. All men like that are the same. Men with Power always want more power, and besides that... it added a nice twist of just how truly unimportant she was to her father when it came right down to the bottom of things. I am an angst writer myself... and it takes alot of deep emotional thought and talent to write good angst... and the two of you have got it going on. So stick your tongues out to the flamers who don't know shit about dark fiction and give them a big raspberry because this is an exceptionally well written Angst. Your chapters are a little short, but hey, its your story, dammit, and its up to you who you pair up, how, what, and where you want to write it. That's why its called "FanFiction". The only reason people flame is because thy don't agree with what you want to make the characters do, and usually because they don't know their butt from a hole in their head when it comes to writing. So, just keep right on doing what you are doing. Practice makes perfect... and you are well on your way.
    Tsuki-san
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  • From Lin on March 13, 2004
    I have never read a Kenshin/Misao pairing because I am a dyed in the wool Kenshin/Kaoru Fan... However... I have been unable to stop reading this delicious story, and I can't wait for more. Would the two of you mind if I posted this dark, yummy offering on my webpage???
    P.S. Kenshin/Battousai makes the sexiest Vampire in the known fantasy world... been thinking about writing a Vamp fic myself. Thank you for this this most appetizing of offerings.
    Kanzen ne Tsuki
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  • From ANON - Lisa on February 04, 2004
    I love this story, it so much darker than most Misao fics. I love that Misao is one of the main characters, because there are so many Karou fics out there and lets face it Karou is boring. Well anyway please update soon, it's a great story.
    Lisa
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  • From ANON - Tanya on February 01, 2004
    Ahhh... definate pleasure, on lit little pain... you both seem to have thrown me off of the tracks! ^^ No worries. You've said alternate pairing, so I would thi think that the one being sold is Misao... *chibi girl runs in circles, pulling hair out* Ahhh! *falls down* At first I thought that the Lord was Shishio, what with Soujiro and all... but then again, it is an A/u fic... *sigh* I'll have to wait until the next chapter! Ja! Tanya
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  • From ANON - oyuki on February 01, 2004
    yo! ff.net isn't working but then i came here and then i saw this chappie and i was very glad! yay! anyway, this is great! i like the start and i know that it it will only get better as the plot thickens! please have some more of this story soon for us readers!
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  • From ANON - Tanya on January 31, 2004
    Oh yes! Please update! *laughs* Gomen... I should haved thd this fic earlier... I found it on MM after I skimmed the first page here! ^^' Anyhow, I know that Chiruken updated on mediaminer... so I will review for both chapters here, even though I've reviewed at MM already! I happen to like the amount of AGNST you have put into the first chapter, as it has been almost smoothed out in the second! So, what will happen to Kaoru know? Ah yes, I have a feeling that it is Kaoru... if I know Chiruken... to which I hopeo! ^o! ^^' Anyhow, great chapter, and I know that Chiruken also has had problems with Yoshii, and has not gotten her beloved laptop back yet... Miko... do you, by any chance, also live in Saskatchewan? ^^' Silly me, you'd think I should know better than to pry into peoples lives... and they say curiousity killed the cat... but I don't care!!! :P Anyhow, I do hope that you both will update soon! I'll be watching, waiting, lurking in the shadows... gee, now I feel like a spy! ^^' Silly me! Ja! ^o^ Tanya
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  • From ANON - Powdered snow on January 22, 2004
    Ok, here's some constructive crit. If you don't like that sort of thing, feel free to ignore. :shrug:

    Good start, although there's more angst than necessary IMO (angst loses its impact if there's too much, ne?). It would've been nice to get a deeper explanation about WHY her father treats her so badly. I guess some people are just b*stards to begin with, but his behavior seemed abrupt without a deeper motivation to me.

    And something about the part about her being sold as a slave doesn't ring true with her family's apparent high status DESPITE her lower class ("his plans to gain more political power and wealth by marrying her off to one of the lord’s of high ranking" implies they had money and status within their class to begin with) and normally, I presume, they won't sell their disobedient children to the slave market since it would tarnish their standing in society.
    On the other hand, good job describing her distaste of the dirty room and its inhabitants. Also kudos for the descriptions of the men mistreating her (although I think you've re-used the word 'ugly' too many times).

    Is this girl an OC or someone from the RK universe? Just to let you know, I don't mind OCs as long as they're characterized well and not Little Miss Mary Sues.

    But I really really hope it's not Misao (hell no) or another one of those impossibly OOC, implausible fics pairing Misao with a random guy like Kenshin or Saitou (it CAN be done in theory, but only if you keep the characters IC and have a believable, logical plot...but I digress. And I hate Misao's guts anyway. :P).

    Ah well. Each to her own, I'll just stop reading if it's about Misao's Meaningful Teenage Angst or a Saitou/Misao/Kenshin love triangle. No need reading about a character or a pairing I detest (unless it's gruesomely OOC and cries out for constructive crit). That's just stupid, ne? ;)
    Regardless, good luck on RP-ing the next chapter to you both.
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