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Reviews for Love or lies

By : katherin
  • From ANON - Pharoh249 on September 20, 2004
    This story, is has got to be the worst pile of pig shit i have ever seen. My ten year old friend could have done this better. And as for the part of Alucard and Anderson being "Friends" that is the stupidest thing i have ever heard, you made him so out of charater that there is no dignity in his name anymore, take my advice,and stick to reading other people's stuff and forget out trying to write your own because YOU SUCK AT IT!
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  • From ANON - lemonfluff on August 07, 2004
    I don't think she is old enough to have an account here. This can't be the work of an adult. Please tell me this isn't the work of an adult. Please?
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  • From ShadowDemon on April 29, 2004
    This really did stink. Ya need a grammar checker too. I even saw where ya comined Alexander and Anderson together. -.- Perhaps you try a different approach with this?
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  • From ANON - Kari on April 06, 2004
    Um... okay... >> Might a suggest a Beta and a spell check for your grammar and spelling?
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  • From ANON - sally doll on March 09, 2004
    No.. just no... stop there... so many things wrong with that... grammer is bad. As for plot- ya we wont even go there. Please do 1 of three things, either label your story a Mary-Sue, fix it, or just take it off.


    ... the bitch has spoken.
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  • From ANON - bob on January 30, 2004
    YOUR GRAMMER SUCKS !!!!

    lol
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