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Reviews for Smiling Monster

By : Reika
  • From ANON - Kayla on May 05, 2005
    Amazing. Just utterly Amazing. *beyond envious* I wish I could write that well.
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  • From ANON - Ryu-chan on January 12, 2005
    Reika!!! So glad to see you back in the land of the living... are you all better now??
    Like before, you've done a great job writing...

    ... looking forward to reading the next few chapters of TFC and more of your work.

    good luck with everything
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  • From ANON - Jade on May 12, 2004
    Excellent, excellent, excellent.

    Captivating sense of detail and a very effective use of the second-person POV.. I think I'm in love!
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  • From ANON - Pink Haired Baka on March 21, 2004
    Oh my god, that was written so well. I really liked how you protrayed the characters. All the emmense details and ranging emotions were heart felt. This fiction was fucking fantastic and I loved how you were sarcastic and dissing Tohma. Personally, I don't like that kid at all. Anyway, it was rather depressing and I'm suddenly not so happy anymore. But that just proves as a writer, you succeeded with getting your message across. Keep up the great work. You're awesome.

    -Shu.
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  • From ANON - Keishi on February 15, 2004
    Wonderful, dark, introspective fic. Loved it, even the writing style.
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  • From ANON - Terry on February 06, 2004
    I really love this fic! Please write a sequel. maybe Yuki pov in it? Keep it going!
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  • From ANON - madness on February 06, 2004
    you weren't kiddiboutbout the depressing...
    good fic anyway!
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  • From ANON - deathswings on February 05, 2004
    I love the perspective in this story-- very good use of second person. I usually don't like stories with angsty sorts of endings, but I really enjoyed this one. You have a real talent for knowing what to describe in detail and what not to-- like Shindou's knees being bruised. Very good story all around!
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  • From ANON - Caska Almasy on February 03, 2004
    That was amazing, simply amazing. This is such a good story and I feel really sad for Hiro. Make a se! I ! I demand that you make a sequel! :P

    love
    Caska
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  • From ErieDragon on February 02, 2004
    Well, let me just tell you: Awesome. A truly original take on the whole twisted relationship, I applaud massively. I would very much like to see a sequel, though the ending you put on this one-shotter is incredible in its own depressing incompleteness. There is something truly talented and artistic about it, and I admire such a thing greatly. I'm eager to see more of your work, whether on this piece or others. Keep up the amazing authoring.
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  • From ANON - Anya on February 02, 2004
    Wow!!! I loved this new stile of writing!!!!! That was really good & please, write a sequel to it!!!! It was really really beautiful sad story. Again, please continue.
    Best Wishes!!!! XD
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