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Reviews for Limp

By : brebre
  • From ANON - Odious Opiate on July 17, 2006
    That was well written and i loved the mythological references. Even though the sex scene was a bit spontaneous, but still, pretty awesome. You're a great writer.
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  • From ANON - konriar on September 05, 2005
    This is above average. It actually had me very engaged at times. Your characterizations were strong, the dialogue was very poignant and beautifully sadistic, the actions and motions accompanying the dialogue complemented it very nicely, as would happen in a real Akito scene. There are times when cliche language and phrases trip you up, and the dialogue would have been even better if it were more subtle (but equally powerful). I can't say I liked the sex scene at all; having Hatori be the seme was an unusual plot twist, but I think it would have worked much better if he were the uke.
    I like your developing style, let me know if you write anything else, especially with our sexy doctor friend.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on October 17, 2004
    Wow, that was really good! Very original -- I like the twist that you added to the character's personalities.....it made them seem really deep. Very artfully written -- Keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - Aya on May 21, 2004
    BEAUTIFUL... Simply beautiful. Makes me love Akito more and more x3. You potray him so well *snuggles Akito* muwahhaha >3
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  • From ANON - q on February 08, 2004
    I challange you to write a Akito/Yuki lemon!
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  • From LucKyo on February 07, 2004
    Whoa, my brains fucked up just from reading this and I mean that in the best possible way! Kickass pairing. I don't usually read Male/Male fanfics, but there's just something about crazy ass Akito and stoic Hatori that gets to me. Great fic.
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  • From ANON - ddrinki4 on February 06, 2004
    That was verrrrryyyyyyyyy interesting. Akito's creepy and evil, but I did enjoy the story. Maybe Hatori is just what the twisted man need.
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  • From ANON - mimi on February 05, 2004
    Whoa, this was wild and addicting. And you definitely have Akito pegged right, personalitse. se. After reading this Ill look forward to your next story. =D
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2004
    *sweatdrop* I'm at a loss for words... need to read again~!
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