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Reviews for FIGHT

By : baybhie
  • From YourBrokenDoll on March 13, 2012
    ...THAT WAS SEXY AS HELL!!!!!!!! *blush* would u mabey do one kinda like that with shuichi and ryuichi im kinda craving that pairing right now ^.^
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  • From ANON - Ralphiere on January 03, 2005
    wow...that was really good! I love how you captured Yuki's anger, but still allowed him to be tender. AND...I absolutely loved that Shuichi liked it rough...too hot.
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  • From ANON - YAOI Princess on December 07, 2004
    I like to congrulate on such a great fan fics. It has been a while since come across upon such a great pice that makes feel life in the beatiful action. I am prod to say this fics will be on my Princess top tenmust read yaoi fanfiction list. I sure my Yaoi fan friends will be delighed.And last but not least THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS SO DETAILED.


    Love your new fan,


    Yaoi Princess

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  • From ANON - Yaoi fan girl princess on December 07, 2004
    I enjoy this fanfics so much. I so into it. As though I was actully their. As Yaoi fan girl Princess I congralate on wirting such a great yaoi . And THANKYOU FOR MAKING IT SO DETAILED.



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  • From ANON - xXKaskading_DarknessXx on May 03, 2004
    Well...I loved your work for 'Phone Call'...But I'm not so much as a fan of this particluar fic.

    1) There's too many excalmn pon points, you *never* use those in a sex sence, never. Ikes kes it sound corny and made up, y'know?

    2) It wasn't very descriptive, you need to have a story behind everything so the readers cadersderstand the story better, like with the fight, you should have written down the fight. It would have been good.

    Well I though I would give you some helpful critizisum, I like the idea, you just need to work on it a bit.

    I still love 'Phone Call' nonetheless ^^
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  • From ANON - Kamui on March 28, 2004
    Umm, all I can say is...Wow..Oo; Just..wow..
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  • From ANON - sam on February 19, 2004
    Your a GREAT writter!! I've been writting fanfics about Gravitation and their not as good as YOURS!!! WOW~ That was the best sex sense never~~~ I hope that you cont. walking fanfics because your a great writter. I hope I can't write as great as you some day. Keep up the good work and I'll be looking for more of your fanfics. Think you can write one about K and Shuichi

    Thanks ~
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  • From ANON - Chiriku on February 10, 2004
    Ow man!!!!!O_O!!! That was SSOOOOO hot!!!
    Want more!!! =) Keep up with the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - hyper on February 08, 2004
    that was good but I feel sorry for those poor exclamaion points ;(
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on February 04, 2004
    Fuck yeah! It was so hot, sexy, and hot! Did I mention how hot it was?
    Well, it's HOT! That was an excellent encounter, please I need more,more,more!
    LATER...
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  • From ANON - Yaky on February 04, 2004
    Oh hell yes! That was definitely HOT!
    OMFG! SOOOO HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Idon\'twantone on February 03, 2004
    HELL YEAH, YOU SHOULD MAKE ANOTHER ENCOUNTER!!! This time, make Yuki spank the little brat that is Shuichi, I mean, C'MON!!! He deserves it! But, it's your story, do whatever!
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