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Reviews for Burned

By : KittyLynne
  • From ANON - Starburst on April 02, 2005
    You are one helluva fanfic writer. I hope you're planning on finishing this story because it's the best thing I've read on the site.
    OR posting another fic (if you got stuck on this one) would be pretty great too. Either way, I'll be happy to read them. :-)
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  • From ANON - Ralina on February 26, 2005
    This story is very enjoyable and I am looking forward to more of it. Keep up the good work!

    ~Ralina~
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  • From ANON - a fan on January 11, 2005
    O KittyLynne, pls, pls update! This fic is so damn good, and I'm sure I'm not the only one thats dying to find out what hppns next!!
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  • From ANON - HUAN LANG on December 20, 2004
    KL, I SWEAR YOU'RE GONNA KILL ME HERE! I'M BEGGIN' YA-PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I NEED SOME GOOD HOT TASUKI AND MIAKA LOVIN' TA KEEP ME WARM IN THE FRIGID COLD OF THE TUNDRA (THE TESSEN JUST AIN'T HACKIN' IT FOR ME ANYMORE!) SO START TYPIN' AWAY, MIGHTY GODDESS OF LOVE!!!!

    HUAN LANG

    PS. NO ONE DOES IT LIKE YOU DO. I'M GROVELIN' HERE, WOMAN!
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  • From ANON - LBH on December 06, 2004
    Just update
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  • From ANON - Lina Inverse on December 04, 2004
    Ha! I found some typos! Ya better go and re-read this to fix 'em.

    I'm impressed by how much detail you put into this and how in-character everybody is.
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  • From ANON - Lina Inverse on December 04, 2004
    You said you welcomed constructive criticism, but I just can't think of anything to criticize. Maybe I'll be more critical in the next chapter and find a typo or a gramatical error or something...
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  • From ANON - Kimura on November 28, 2004
    AWESOME!
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  • From ANON - MizuOnna on November 20, 2004
    Oh, it just gets better and better . . . please do continue. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Icewing on November 10, 2004
    You've got some good stuff going here Kitty!
    My hat's off to you... or it would be if i was wearing on.
    Please keep the fun stuff coming. I can't wait to see how you play this out. ;)
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  • From ANON - Karisma on November 10, 2004
    Great start to the third chapter! I thought it was sweet that Miaka is pushing herself to be more open with Tasuki even though it's totally against her nature. You did a good job with their conversation. Tasuki reacted like most men would to something like that, but he still takes her feelings under account. On the flip side, I liked the subtle way you showed his possessive, jealous side in the marketplace-it gave me goosebumps (the good kind.) That brings me to Chichiri *sighs* Poor man, can't he find someone, so everyone can be fulfilled and happy? Is a threesome out of the question? Hehe. I'm just joking. I just would like te eve everyone happy at the end- but I'm not worried. Something tells me you won't let Chiri suffer.

    Your writing is so polished. Beautiful and descriptive too, I get caught up in every scene, whether it's funny, sexy or angsty. IF your other stories are like this one, I'd say Tasuki and Miaka are in excellent hands.

    I will be checking back for the update. Can't wait!

    Kari
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  • From ANON - Dae on November 03, 2004
    MORE! I DEMAND MORE! How dare you stop this chapteW!!!W!!! PLEASE, I can't TAKE it!!!!
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  • From ANON - Flame Haired Wench on September 18, 2004
    This is a great story, with very sexy and emotive writing. Really like the pairing the way you write it, but it's yin'yin' shame that Chichiri can't get a little lovin' too... ~v~
    Hope you can update soon.


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  • From ANON - Raine on August 31, 2004
    please finish this soon... i relly like the piaring... begging you, FATE GODDESS...
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  • From ANON - Icia on August 31, 2004
    AHHHHHHHHH, you have to update that soon. this is written very well, one of the best i've read on here (if not THE best). i hope you update soon.
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