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Reviews for Burned

By : KittyLynne
  • From ANON - Icia on August 31, 2004
    omg omg omg omg!! that was GREAT!! i can't wait to read this next chapter
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  • From ANON - Karisma on August 22, 2004
    Wow. I can't believe I finally found a fic that's classy, romantic, erotic as all get out- and *brilliantly* written. Trust me, I'm not one of those review sluts that says that to everyone. In fact, I'm not using my pen name so you know I'm not doing this for a thank you review.

    Can't think of anything I'd change or add. Your writing rocks, and this story rocks! Hope you can post the next chapter soon!

    cheers,
    Kari
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  • From ANON - Shadowcat24601 on August 04, 2004
    *glomps muchly* Wow. This is the first story on aff that I've even felt inclined to review for, way to go!

    Your skills as a writer leaves very little lacking. Excellent work. ^_^ The story flows smoothly and it's clear that you're not just after a "sex run" which is highly honorable as well. The detailed descriptions aren't overwhelming and the plot is an exceptionaly good one, and, I can assure you, I'm not just spitting out praise for flattery's sake, I mean it. I can only hope that you find my compiments well-founded as well, because there, lays true strength as a writer. Confidence: don't lose it.

    Please be sure to keep me updated on all that you're doing, I'd appreciate it. ^_^
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  • From on July 22, 2004
    I just wanted to say that I really like this fic. :) I haven't read any anime fic in a long time, and lemme tell you, you've got me way interested in FY all over again. ^^ I look forward to the next chapter and thanks for introducing (through this fic) me to all the wonders of Tasuki/Miaka. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - thebigW on July 10, 2004
    Well, what a wonderful piece of fiction. I linked to your story from a review you left for another author. I'm checking out this site because Fanfiction.net za my my i.d. for (I believe) a lemon I posted there, so I was checking this site out to see if I could post it here (It's called "This Much", a romantic Tenchi Muyo! story). Even without the lemon, your story is spellbinding. The way you have Miaka ultimately accept that a few days of passion and love might be all she's entitled to in this life was very touching. We always knew Tasuki was a teddy bear beneath the gruff exterior when it comes to Mi-chan, but your writing gave us the selflessness (particularly in the way that he explained to Miaka that the first time was "all about her") that we rarely get to see. Please continue the story and thanks for the inspiration. I will register and post my fic in a few days.
    W.
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  • From ANON - himechan on June 24, 2004
    PLEASE UPDATE!!!! love the story. there are not enough tasuki/miaka fics out there. please please update...::gives a tasuki clone:: see now you have a tasuki. hehe

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  • From ANON - Jinmirai on June 01, 2004
    Thank you for this wonderful fanfic! I love romantic lemons and I really hope you will continue this one soon. This is the first Tas/Mia fanfic I have read and it went way over my expetations. Very well written!
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  • From ANON - aku_neko on May 25, 2004
    hot dog. This story sure is full of passion. The story is wonderfully written and i've got to say, that i'm mighty jealous. It has been a while since i've last read a Fushigi Yuugi fand and this is my first Miyaka/Tsuki one. You have me hooked on this pair now!
    What is the truth behind Little ghost? oh, so much to be revealed. i sure hope to read more soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Fushigi Wolf on May 20, 2004
    Hey there! I absolulely LOVE this! You did an awesome job with the lemon and I really can't wait for the next chapter..lol. I have read sof yof your other stuff on FF.net and I was so happy when I seen the author alert in my mailbox.. as soon as I finished with that chapter I came here.. I wanted more! lol. ^_~
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  • From ANON - Miaka on May 03, 2004
    hey Kitty,
    ur fic is the first Lemon i read n it was awesome!! ur writing another chapter!Well!!! I want u to write further. ur fic had everything.i loved it!!cool yaar!!!!plz continue"burned"

    expecting ur next fic,
    Miaka
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  • From ANON - Silver1 on May 01, 2004
    I really enjoy Tasuki/Miaka pairings, so I was very happy to see this story. The only question I have is that I see its been updated, but this is still on the second chapter????? Since the basic story is still the same, I can only assume that the currect chapters have been revised. I am really loking forward to a new chapter...please update soonest!!! BTW REALLY REALLY liked the scene beteween Tasuki and Miaka...and no intercourse yet!!!
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  • From ANON - HUANLANG on April 20, 2004
    HURRY UP AND WRITE ME THE BANDIT UP SOME HAPPY ACTION TIME FOR MY SENSUAL EDIFICATION THERE KITTY L, PUT THAT PEN TO PARCHMENT AND LET IT BURN YOU KNOW I LIKE IT HOT!!! YA KNOW PURFICALLY TANTILIZINGLY HOT!!! SO WHATS TAKEN YOU SO LONG GO GO GO!!!
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  • From ANON - Mizu on April 20, 2004
    I've always been fond of the Tasuki x Miaka pairing, and sadly, I never saw any exeptionally well-written fanfics . . . until I came across this one. And not only is it well-written--it has lemons, too! Anyway, this is excellent; the premise is interesting, and I like the dynamics of the relationship between Tasuki and Miaka. . . . And Chichiri thrown into the picture is just lovely. I can't wait for the next chapter. . . . Hopefully, Miaka's going to return the favor now? ^_^
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  • From ForestMaiden on April 19, 2004
    Another great story that's great and you've got me hooked on. ^.^ Still waiting for the finish of Leather and Lace, the second story of the Promise, and now this. ...Well, your stories are so good I'll wait and be a good girl. *sigh* But I won't like it. I won't like it at all. ^-^ Please hurry up and finish.
    I love your work. You are the best fanfic writer I have ever encountered. Hope you keep writing.

    ForestMaiden

    P.S. I do yahoo. You? Hevenly_Fox_Maiden (Just in case you want to be friends ^_^)

    Later!

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  • From ANON - Love Hime on April 18, 2004
    Mmm, that was really well written. Very sensual. I always liked the Tasuki/Miaka pairing, glad you do too! Write more!
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