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Reviews for Burned

By : KittyLynne
  • From ANON - Kaede on March 30, 2004
    ooooweeeee...my eyeballs be sweating... @_@

    this be a very hot story! please update soon!

    Kaede
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  • From ANON - Knives on March 25, 2004
    0.0 I LOVED IT !!!!!!!!! SHOOO KAWAI!! I love the Tasuki/Miaka pairing!
    Keep your little army who gives you ideas and add this next part you've mentioned! I'm putting this on my fav's page,
    so make it worth my time or I shall have all the little plushie ns hns hunt you down and
    type the whole next part themselves!!! MWAHAHAHAHA!!!
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  • From ANON - TasMia on March 25, 2004
    In the immortal words of the nameless bandit of Leikaku--- I found you! LOL!!!!! I saw your mention of this fic in your ff.net bio so i had to come and check it out. Not really a fan of lemons, but this one is an exception. it's just a lovely story, and the way you write the intimate momentst between Tas and Mia is beautiful and romantic, not icky and vulgar. I felt really good after reading it--almost too good. ha ha too bad my fiance isn't here right now.... >:)
    Keep up the great writing and we will see ya next chappie!

    TML

    PS. I am looking forward to your update on The Promise! YAY!!!!

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  • From ANON - kuroi_hane on March 21, 2004
    WHOO! aga again u've out done urself! ur such an amazing author kittylynne! please please please update soon!! [and ur other fics on ff.net as well!] ^______^
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  • From ANON - Tenshi Kitsune on March 19, 2004
    wow... you really are turning into a hentai no kitty! i like it! this latest chapter was fiery and passionate, kinda sweet at times and kinda funny too, but mostly just fiery hot! you write well normally, but for some reason scenes where emotions run high (ch20 of the promise that l&l chappy where dante and mia are alone at his place...) bring out the best in your writing. most amazing indeed. i want more soon! keep it up, kl! you're doing amazing!
    ~Tenshi Kitsune~
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  • From ANON - Valy on March 18, 2004
    Since I'm not good at reviewing, the simplest word will be the best.

    *licks lips* Delicious.

    When is the next mouthful for? ~_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 18, 2004
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was the best, NO strike that the hotest sceen ive read ever!!!!! that was well it makes me do a happy dance seeing those two together. I belive that you are setting this up for a great story and i cant wait to read what else you have intore for use later on in the story.
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  • From ANON - Desiderata on March 18, 2004
    This was very hot and totally amazing. >:) I got so wrapped up in the emotions and feelings, I had to stop reading it for a bit, it was that overwhelming. I'm not surpised tho, since I've seen that quality in your writing many times in The Promise, and Leather and Lace too. Your talent for engaging a readers emotions and making them care about your characters is second to none. Tasuki x Miaka rules!!!!!!!
    Can't wait for the third chapter of Burned and for the updates on your other stories too, its been a long while!

    cheers,
    Desi
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  • From ANON - Desiderata on March 18, 2004
    Wow, KittyLynne! This is a lot different than what you have written on fanfiction.net, but it's so good! Poor Miaka, she needs some loving after holding out for so long, and Tasuki is just the guy to give it to her. You make their attraction so intense and real, and I can't wait to get to the next chapter to find out what happens so I will stop here for now.

    cheers,
    Desi
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  • From ANON - ~Silent Messiah~ on March 17, 2004
    KL

    This thing needs warning labels. I swear if the FDA got ahold of this you'd be in big trouble.

    Suggested warning labels:

    Do Not Read While at Work (from the 'Scribe)
    No Food or Beverages While Reading (could cause choking)
    Keep Fire Extinguisher handy (using fire exstinguisher lightly....leave that up to your ecchi mind ^_^)
    Best Read with a Partner ^_^

    That's it off hand. I'll anxiously await the next installment. And heed my own warnings?

    ~SM~
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  • From ANON - Katsu on March 16, 2004
    T-T I almost started crying...I'm not EXACTLY sure as to why that emotion came about but...i d'no....-looks around for her boyfriend- where is that baka at when i need him the most T-T
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  • From ANON - Cari on March 15, 2004
    Whoot! Second cha eve even better then the first! You truely have a flare for writing Tasuki/Miaka stories. As Oliver used to say "I'd like some more, please."
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  • From ANON - Amiboshi-chan on March 15, 2004
    Oo la la...I like this story! As usual, you've created a wonderful, spicy and captivating story! ^_^

    I'll have to review again when I'm in a more constructive mood. I'm sure review isn't exactly helpful, but hey, makes ya feel good, doesn't it? *giggles*

    Hmm... my only comment; in the line "Of all the Suzaku seishi she’d have thought that Tasuki would miss her the least, given how he felt about w." ." I disagree, as Tasuki mentions more than once that he doesn't see Miaka the same way he does other women...but it is your story, and it's wonderful and don't listen to me; just the fact that that's all I have to comment on should let you know that my first impression is a good one. ^_~

    Anyway, keep writing, and I'll keep reading!

    Love, A-chan
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  • From ANON - Caro on March 15, 2004
    Oh Lynne, this is an amazing fic, the way you describe their feelings, their actions...step by step...wow. Tamahome might be Miaka´s love interest, but I feel that Takuki should be the one for her. Great fic!!
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  • From ANON - Big Scary Monster on March 13, 2004
    What???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KL writing erotica? Que Cosa! The scary thing about this is that it was extremely well done. I have read erotica before and the description was unlike any I have read before. Nice job.

    As far as the plot goes, I wonder how many people go through the torturous tumult of what Miaka and Tasuki are going through. There is a very important amoral-socio message here and it was well-received by Big Scary. Miaka must be going nuts! (no pun intended of course)

    I love, KL, how you bring your characters to life-I delved right in!

    There were "technical" questions I had...so if you want to ask me...I think (and hope) you know who I am.

    As always a superior writing performance. Be proud!

    AA :)
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