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By : KittyLynne
  • From ANON - The Bandit on March 13, 2004
    Well KittyMeBabe, all I can add to what I've already told ya is that you really know how to set a mood! >;-)
    The thing that I like about your love scenes is that they're based on deep love. You did a great job in establishing those feelings between Fang Boy and Miaka in a very short time.
    I can't help feeling sorry for the monk tho, Heh heh.

    Keep up the great work.
    Love ya,
    The Bandit




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  • From ANON - Anon on March 13, 2004
    Fabulous job! I love where this is going. (I too, am a TasukiXMiaka fan! ^-^) It is a very well-detailed romance with much creativity. I can't wait for your update! Keep up the terrific work and good luck in writing future stories!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 08, 2004
    OH that was great i am so looking forward to reading more of this story please continue when u have a spare moment!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Talena on March 07, 2004
    Hey! nice story, no da! XD keep up the good work!, hope you have next chapter soon
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  • From ANON - Tasuki\'s Flame on February 29, 2004
    I likes it ^_^ Keep up the good work. AKA MORE WANT MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - ~Silent Messiah~ on February 28, 2004
    KL-no-hentai!

    I can't believe it! You actually did it!....*looks at a broken thermometer* You broke my sizzle meter! If I thought the teaser was hot...boy was I wrong this even though an opening chapter was way much more. I'm actually kinda scared to see the rest....but you sure better write more!!!! If not I'll be forced to use drastic measures...*prepares her arsenal of crossdressers to raid should KL not finish this fic*

    ~SM~
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  • From ANON - Cari on February 26, 2004
    This has to be one of the best Tasuki/Miaka parings I've ever read, mainly because they are really staying in character. Keep it up and keep it going!


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  • From ANON - vampireshinigami on February 19, 2004
    This story is very well done for the first chapter. ((_^= Please keep writing
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  • From ANON - Milkshake on February 16, 2004
    Hello!
    Wow, great opening chapter. While I would have been jumping for joy if Tasuki and Miaka had let nature run its course, I like it better that you held them off. Gives them time to sort themselves out ^.^ and not rush into things, especiallen ten they're a bit drunk!
    I'm curious to where Little Ghost ended up. Maybe he is in Miaka's world but just in another country... Or maybe he never went there but ended up in another world... Hmm. Hope you update soon so that I can find out ^.~ And of course, more Miaka/Tasuki citrusy goodness as well. Sounds good to mehankhank you for your review and never-ending song on ff.net, I have a reputation among my friends for getting amusing emails and reviews! It did cheer me up though, thank you. ::sends a hug back across Atlantic::
    Hope you are all okay and can't wait for the next chapter (another fic to add to my bookmark collect^.^)^.^)
    Take care,
    Milkshake
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  • From ANON - Tenshi Kitsune on February 11, 2004
    okay first and foremost: MORE! please? need to read more of this beautiful ficcy! tis amazing i tell ya! i wanted tasuki and miaka to kiss so badly that i actually cursed my magician for walking in on them! i never curse Chiri no matter what, but in this case i had to make an exception. the descriptions of tasuki and miaka together were so real and intense, but yet soft and shy too...i hit my head on the monitor i was so into the chappy! x:) as usual you have this amazing ability to make a story seem real and the peole in it even more real. i also really liked how you made chichiri so understanding about tasuki and mia's feelings towards each other and how because of that, he didn't want to ruin miaka's happiness by telling her about tamahome. good characterization, fitting and yet different from other writers somehow. at any rate, you made my dday with this, but english calls (see? i even stopped my homework to reads cas cause i knew it was going to be amgly gly beautiful and full of fire).
    later days, (hopefully not too much later, but if it ends up way way no problems)
    ~Tenshi Kitsune~
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  • From ANON - Spak-chan on February 11, 2004
    *squees all over KL* Wonderful! Magnificiento! (not sure exactly what language that is...)

    But then you already know what I think. ^.~ Great job, KL! You can reduce a fangirl to a puddle without even having a kiss in the chapter! Gah!


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  • From ANON - Kalika on February 11, 2004
    This is so far a very good fan fiction. Your writing draws the reader in, please continue you are a great author. Well keep up the great work.
    Kalika
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  • From ANON - The Bandit on February 11, 2004
    Kittymebabe,

    Great job with the tension-you've gotten your poor hubby all hot and bothered now. Grrrrrowl!
    I think this is some of your best writing yet, to be honest.
    Glad you got over that spell of writers block in such a fine and sexual fashion. Don't stop now! Please - don't - stop!
    >evil grin
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  • From ANON - amyfushigiyugi on February 11, 2004
    wow i love it so far tasuki sounds compleatly yummmmmmy and chichiri sounds very understanding of it all as he sound he always did know more then others hope its not to long for the update because it looks to be a awsome story
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