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Reviews for All That Lingers

By : twistedcherry
  • From ANON - Lacerta (lacerta3@hotmail.com) on October 26, 2006

    Even though you last updated on 2004 I refuse to give up hope, because, maybe, someday, you'll keep writting this. I can't wait to know what happens, but I also know that good things come with time. So I will wait.
    :)
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  • From ANON - TenshiKaitou on March 20, 2005
    i hope you do intend to continue with this fic, because it pretty much hooked up my interest. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Val Mora on February 07, 2005
    It's an interesting beginning, but the main problem with the fic is that in the flashback, Sanzo really doesn't act like he's sixteen. Also, you spend a lot of time in exposition in the first chapter, which is really not such a good idea - you lose readers very quickly. It would probably be better to keep Sanzo's past a secret for now, and reveal the story of why he hates the rain only later. Instead, get on with what's happening in his life now, and have the secret about his past keep coming up and baffling the readers - and keeping their interest.
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on December 16, 2004
    wow... that was great. hurry and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Tempest Rage on December 09, 2004
    That was....amazing.I hope you continue soon,as the suspense is completely unbearable.
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  • From SilverFox on December 03, 2004
    Oh pretty good so far. I don't read too many yaoi's but I think I will this one, this one has caught my interest indeed...Until next time! ^_^
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  • From ANON - unmei no hogo on August 17, 2004
    wow!
    Impressive, is putting it mildly. Extremely well written. I can't wait for the rest of it!!!you've got real skill as a writter.I'm new to the fan fiction thing and it's becoming a pleasure I don't understand how I lived without. And Saiyuki is a fav anime of mine so it all fits into place. I'll be waiting on pins and needles for the next installment. By the way,....if you have anything else posted anywhere else on this vast internet of ours mind sen me me word about it? I could a good read.
    *evil grin*


    Ja-ne!
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  • From ANON - MaryR on May 17, 2004
    Cool, I saw your story on Fanfic.net and I just happened to see it here to. I’m glad to see there is an NC-17 version of this story.

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  • From ANON - SwitchVale on April 16, 2004
    Nice! i saw this story on ff.net too, and i think this is a wonderful story! i love the fact that used the Fact that Goku was on LCDs for him to see Sanzo as his sun. really good! please tell me you'll update soon!
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  • From ANON - Mitsko on April 11, 2004
    This is really good, right more, I want to see what happens.

    ~Mitsko
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  • From ANON - Deenosaur on April 11, 2004
    Dude, just finish the fic! You're killing us here!
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  • From NekoMegamichan on April 05, 2004
    Wow! I really didn't expect this fic to be so good when i opened it up! I've seen similar plotlines before, but none of them kept my interest. Your detail is commendable. Now I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Shin_yue on March 12, 2004
    i loved this i cant wait for more. this story was in my head for days
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  • From ANON - TitiusComet on March 11, 2004
    Oh come *on* already! Finish the fic! Your reviewers want more of your lovely ficness!
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  • From ANON - Saru on March 04, 2004
    Holy shit! O.o That's the best reincarnation fic I've ever read, and I think I'll go insane if you don't finish it! Please, please, please finish the fic!
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