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Reviews for Hatred in the Moonlight

By : heartlessgrey
  • From MegFallow on April 12, 2007
    *squeals like a fangirl on crack*

    Brillient! Its almost like they are having a secret sexual randevous. Nicely written! Keep up the good work!
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  • From on March 31, 2007
    Oh My God. That was almost too hot to handle. I think I drooled all over my keyboard. Great job!
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  • From ANON - empress_eerian_sadow on January 18, 2006
    most interesting...
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  • From ANON - cideon on May 25, 2005
    Really great! I am so eager to see the next part! Poor Anderson..he makes the perfect uke, since he can heal it all XD
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  • From ANON - Akela on March 27, 2005
    hmm... interesting... perhaps i should be reading more of these...
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 24, 2004
    I know this was written awile ago but i like it
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  • From ANON - vampyric_lovechylde on August 31, 2004
    you need to write sequals to this.. maybe one where the tides are turneed? who knows.......... i enjoyed this fic verry much and most of your others as well...............please write more???????
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  • From ANON - vmwpoc on August 16, 2004
    Wonderful! That has to be the best AxA fic I've read so far.... d itd it!

    And about in episode 7 where someone should push Alucard and Anderson together, I actually did edit a picture of that scene and di just that.

    I would give you the url where I uploaded it to but the site's down now so when Read the next chapter and review I'll give you the url.
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  • From ANON - Curio on July 08, 2004
    You DO know that when you take the clip out of a gun, there's still one bullet left in the chamber, right?

    That would be scary.
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  • From ANON - Koryu on April 20, 2004
    The best thing to read after a bad day in school. It´s wonderfull, really. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Youkoico on April 13, 2004
    WOW!!!!! DUDE THAT WAZ COOL!!!~no more soda for meh~ I realy liked it. i printed it out and brought it to school to show EVERYONE! :D
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  • From Morganite on April 06, 2004
    Eeeee that wsa great, I love how you make theeableable crazy bastard that is Alex seem so vulnerable. And yes, I had noticed the bit in ep 7 (the bit right after Alucard tells Alex that he's "fun"?), though not the other one. And now I am off to read the sequel *grins fangirlishly*
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  • From ANON - Rage on April 05, 2004
    Yes, maybe there are indeed some plot mistakes BUT AxA is realy IMPOSSIBLE to find 'round the web! I am TIRED of looking for it, so HUGE THANK YOU for this fic and "To Pay the Piper" - such people like you, VelvetBlood ( Amoire ab hostis , Daste of darkness) and Dogwitch (Fall From Grace) really provide a salvation for AxA fans. BTW do you know any links to AxA pictures? Well, i do have some pics, but...but that's not enough ^^" (i can share them if you want)
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  • From ANON - Dogwitch on March 27, 2004
    YOWZA!! That was so HOT! *pants and tries to calm down* I'm really eager to read more!

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  • From ANON - FrostRiven on March 20, 2004
    Since you actual ask for (and I'm assuming, appreciate) constructive criticism...

    A few technical points:
    "dying"-- watch that one; it's misspelled a few times.
    And you did a lot of repitition-- you used the same word several times in a short space of time-- and there were a few places that the word choice made me wonder... "moronic" was one of them. ^_^

    Plot, characterization, etc:
    Mmm... I would have liked a bit more of Anderson's motivation, even if it's just a sentence or two. I mean, he seems really fanatical in the anime and manga, so it's really hard to get him into this position-- heh-- without a lot of explaination and motivation. But it's not impossible to do. In the manga, it's clear that they respect each other and that they love playing with one another, and even understand one another to a certain degree, and it would be real easy to throw a few more hints of that into this story.

    Other than that, this was cool! Thanks for posting it for the rest of us. (I'm always up for AxA... Yum!) I'm looking forward to the next part/story; get writing! ^_~
    And if you want a beta reader I'd be more than willing to help out-- just drop me an email.
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