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Reviews for Once Upon A Bath

By : storyweaver
  • From Lyfe on June 27, 2007
    In a sense, I don't care if May gets it on with Ash again. As long as it doesn't involve love. Yeah, MayxMisty would seem really nice, you could have Max come in and have a bit of incest! Hahahaha, corrupt their minds, their innocent, young minds, hahahahaha! I'd like to see a really dirty MayxAshxMisty lemon, with Brock watching and getting denied! I love seeing him suffer!
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  • From Lyfe on June 27, 2007
    Jessie used them like they were toys!
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  • From Lyfe on June 27, 2007
    May's horny, ahahaha!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2006
    it was good but it should be longer and have a little more detail.(constructive criticizm)
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  • From ANON - DarkMastero on June 04, 2005
    It could use some detail, and the second chapter was hard to imagen. But otherwise okay for a lemon.
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  • From ANON - URHere on February 15, 2005
    Wow... It's so freaky, it's interesting. Updte soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Erick on December 09, 2004
    i hope you read this review. i liked the story. you should continue writting this fanfic. bye.

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  • From ANON - facil991 on November 20, 2004
    woo go may, that was great hahaha ultra funni
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  • From on September 26, 2004
    This is a good story for far i want to know what happens after this chapter plez write the next chapter of this story b/c it is very funny how May changed just by seeing Brock and Ash naked.
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  • From ANON - Soul_of_Hell on September 26, 2004
    I think it was a good chapter keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - blah on June 14, 2004
    oohh.. continue plz! and can u plz make this a yaoi 2, with Max/Ash/Brock?
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  • From ANON - Demon from Beyond on May 10, 2004
    Interesting. How about a Misty/May scene?
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  • From ANON - TheDarkOne on May 08, 2004
    right.......


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    "Haha, I'll kill them all, women and kids, sickly old men, until every foot of dirt is a grave, then I'll stand there on top. I'll kill them all, I'll kill them all, I'll kill them all."
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  • From ANON - sitboy on April 12, 2004
    I liked it, you got the cheaters down good.
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  • From ANON - Meg on April 08, 2004
    THis story was so cute!! Please keep updating it!!
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