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By : elyonevans
  • From Koruchan on May 01, 2007
    umm... that wasn't even a lemon. Nothing happened between them. I would say it was cute, but it wasn't even that. There was no real fluff...
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  • From ANON - pochi on November 11, 2005
    oh my gosh..
    trina?!
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  • From ANON - Inu-midoriko on August 17, 2005
    hey
    i read sumthin' like this on fanfiction i think it's the same story by you
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  • From ANON - Narugami Kiyou on July 22, 2005
    the outburst was very unnatural, but before that's everything's all good, kind of rushed though...
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  • From ANON - Trey Racer on July 02, 2005
    Plagiarism.
    I sread a fic exactly like this in ff.net. Same plot, but this ifc had a few modifications.
    Either way, this is totally unoriginal. >.>

    The one in ff.net was posted somewhere in early 2003 by a Filipino authoress.
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  • From ANON - icomeanon on March 12, 2005
    BASTARD! DAMN YOU! MORE! YOU SHUT IT OFF RIGHT WHEN IT GOT GOOD. ASSHOLE! FINISH THE DAMN FIC!
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  • From ANON - Keiko on September 01, 2004
    ... did you get this fic from somewhere else? Because there's the same fic on ff.net under a different author and a different title. Only with more chapters, this is only the first chapter in that fic.

    and to one of the fellow reviewers.. it IS asakura yoh.
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  • From ANON - SDS-YukiChan on July 25, 2004
    Pretty good. =D

    Oh, bio1590, I'm not being rude, but Asakura Yoh is fine. In Japan, sometimes the last name comes before the first name. ^^'
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  • From on July 13, 2004
    pretty good 4 a first time, i have nevr written a lemon fic, EVER in my life, so, i have no idea if mine would be bad or good, anyways, pretty good, hope ya update soon.

    ~Let the peacefulness of water be still in your walk in the life ahead...~

    ~Hªtﮪ-Dªüghtë®_ºf_Wªtë®~
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  • From ANON - Claire on June 26, 2004
    ermmmmm...good
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  • From ANON - S.M. on June 15, 2004
    can't wait for more,please update as soon as possible
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  • From ANON - yuyuyasha33 on May 08, 2004
    Um...that's it?
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  • From ANON - Wolfboy1988 on April 27, 2004
    I WANT A UPDATE!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Rukato86 on April 22, 2004
    Update! update! update! update! update! update! update! Update! update! update! update! update! update! update! Update! update! update! update! update! update! update! Update! update! update! update! update! update! update! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........... can ya tell I'm desperate for an update?^_^.
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  • From ANON - bio1590 on April 12, 2004
    One thing, it's YOH ASAKURA, not ASAKURA YOH
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