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By : VickieB
  • From ANON - iJ3i on August 11, 2004
    It's so unfair!! I had to wait so long!! This site never works!!

    Now that that's out of my system, I have to say that I'm almost left speechless. And that's saying something because I talk waaaay too much. And I have the favorite chapter syndrome, where I read a chapter and go, this is my favorite, and then I read the next, and then I'm like, no, *this* is my favorite. W I'm I'm going to say that this is my fave chapter until you update. That way, it won't be a lie. ^^

    Um...what first...well...I feel soo sorry for poor Mikey. I can only relate with the whole panic attack thing, ( ::has had one too many:: ) but that's not even half his struggles, and they're bad enough on their own. I don't think I've ever wanted to give a bishie a hug any more than I do now...even taking Amon into consideration. Though...I'd still like to glomp him... Anyway, I watched a movie about rape today, so I was feeling a little down about the whole subject matter, and then this just made me even more down, but that's not a bad thing. It means, of course, that your work is powerful...touching.

    And...I *really* want Amon to beat Zaizen's ass. Like...*major:nod:nod:: That would be nice. A...little shot with the orbo. Nah. That would be a waste. A good, physical beat down is much more...vengeful. Don't forget to hit him once for me!!

    How ever you decide to give Zaizen his comeuppance (which you will, *right?* ::puppy dog eyes:: ) I'm sure it's going to be awesome. And how will I verify whether I'm right or not? You guessed it...a quick update!! ::wink wink:: Latah!

    (A saddened, but enthused) J3
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  • From ANON - Bubbles on August 08, 2004
    I blame you! Yes it's allr far fault! I couldn't stand any kind of Male/Male stories (even though now I'm a huge fan of Gravitation) They drove me nuts till I discovered this story, I couldn't help but read it; It called my name. Anywho it's very, very well written and I can't wait till there is more, Iactuactually been reading this a while, but finally got around to reviewing -.-'
    Anywho yea, keep it up.
    Tata for now

    Your friendly Bouncing Bubbles
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  • From ANON - auronslover on August 07, 2004
    good chapter poor amon and michale bad bad zaizen please update soon i can't wait
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  • From Michiru2000 on August 06, 2004
    Yay! You updated! I'm feeling so bad for Michael, though--I gotta say, I'm not a fan of rape, and I'm still holding out for Robin to show up and put Zaizen in an oven. Better yet, let's let Michael do it. You're doing really well with this, and I'm hooked.
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  • From ANON - Ru-chan on July 22, 2004
    TT_TT Poor Michael! +gives Michael a hug+ Kill Zaizen! +borrows Abyssinian's katana and slays Zaizen with it+ ...rawr.
    I have to say, this is the best WHR fic I've read so far... ^-^ Heeheehee. >.> .> I've got something for rape fics... ^^;; Excellent fic, this is, indeed. KEEP WRITING!! RAWR!! XD
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  • From ANON - Sapphire on July 16, 2004
    beautiful as always, even if I feel too tired to even write a review (or spell it for that mater)
    I think Sakaki is too cute, he makes me want to squeeze him...
    Too tired... ninigh...
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  • From ANON - iJ3i on July 13, 2004
    Great, now I'm ultra paranoid about that whole ratings thing. ::scratches head:: On to the point:
    ::jumps for joy:: How nice...they finally got some time together and did some good ol' fashioned kinks! How Michael washed and rinsed Sakaki's hair safely is beyond me. *I* can't keep the soap from my eyes for the life of me. Michael's got mad skills! ANYhoo, I'm through being silly. Great update and I can't wait for more! ::pictures an annoyed seagull:: Oh, gees... I wonder how long that'll stick with me....
    Update soon!
    J3
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  • From ANON - auronslover on July 13, 2004
    i love this story i don't think ive ever been so anxious for a update th for for the update!!! please update soon i love this story
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  • From ANON - Liz on July 10, 2004
    Hmm. You know a good way for them to beat Zaizan? Tell Robin what's going on. She'll burn him into a big pile of Zaizen-steak.
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  • From ANON - Finchgirl on June 17, 2004
    Well, usually I don't like slash, and to be frank I skim the lemons, but beyond that I do like the story. You have a good plot, your writing flows well, and I would like to see how this whole thing turns out. Personally I would like to see Zaizen make a try for Robin, and get fried (or at least singed, if you don't want to kill him off just yet). What a bastard, he deserves it.
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  • From ANON - Sapphire on June 13, 2004
    *sniff* this is sad... and angsty... although I should have expected that from a rape fic...

    Its good, and you shoupdaupdate it soon.
    I like how you left off this chapter, atleast sakaki(sp?) finnaly gets to wake up next to his lover.
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  • From ANON - iJ3i on June 11, 2004
    I am so sorry about the double review! I *HATE* it when that happens! ANYhoo, I just want you to know I'm still a great big fan of this story, and icoulcould, I'd give Amon the biggest hug right now. Hene one of mye che characters and...it's just so sad what's going on with all the guys. ::shakes head:: I *cannot* wait for the climax and I hope you update soon! I'm starting to bite my nails to the nubs with anticipation!

    J3
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  • From ANON - eve on June 06, 2004
    Wow! This is an awsome story. Damn Zaizen, he's a fucking bastard. he deserves to die VERY slow, VERY painful death! Update soon.
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  • From ANON - alyson b. costa on May 29, 2004
    please write more! i can't wait to find out more! that informant that amon has ........ maybe he's the one who used to comfort amon back before michael took his place? can't wait! i look forward to your next installment! does that make me really sadistic? keep going, and please update soon :D -- alyson -- http://www.visual-sentiments.net - tlcsucker@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - iJ3i on May 25, 2004
    Excellent chapter, as always. It's important to let us feel the heartbreak all tll the pain, so that when Zaizen finally gets his comeuppance, it'll be that much better. Waiting for updates is such agony! ::rubs hands together:: Damn. I wish Amon could have gotten there sooner, but...as I said before, we need all the angst and torture we can stand. Gees, this story rocks. Please Update...update...update! Burn Zaizen! Just desserts!

    J3
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