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Reviews for Butterfly

By : yari
  • From MegFallow on March 17, 2007
    Oh yeah so hot, I don't seriously approve of rape but man you could tell that was DRACULA the way he gets his women on the hunt. Good work!
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  • From ANON - SisterErotica on January 01, 2006
    I didn't really care for this. Alucard is very animalistic but this didn't portray him as the ultra intelligant being his is. Remember he's a super intelligant monster not a human male on the prowl for a one night stand. He could easily just convince someone to sleep with him if he wanted to.
    I liked your describtions but I think reading some of the series before taking a shot at writing about a character is the best policy. Alucard wear white gloves by the way.
    I think with a little bit of research and some reading your writing skill could take you far. You should try a hand at writing you own stories, i'd read them. Everyone has a little bit of trouble with writing. My issue is spelling and editing LOL (sorry about anything mis-spelled)
    I think that maybe once you know more about the series you could revise this fic until it is satisfactory. Keep writing.
    SisterErotica
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  • From ANON - Desdinova on July 31, 2004
    I don’t really know Alucard, I just heard my friends speak about it so often and decided to make them this presenlucalucard is really violating but I think you could just take this as Alucards life bevor he was vampire of Integra’s family (somehow) anyway enjoy.


    Actually, you're right. You DON'T know anything about Alucard. In the amount of time it took to write this, you could have researched the subject enough to know that Alucard DOES. NOT. EVER. RA He He doesn't need to.

    Ah, but it's YOUR story, right? Can write anything you want to and nobody will stop you? True enough, I suppose.

    Names notwithstanding, this is NOT Alucard, no matter how many times you use the label. I can call a frog my fairy prince all I want, but the damn thing continues to catch flies and croak.
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  • From ANON - Orlock on July 30, 2004
    Wow. This couldn't be less like Alucard if you tried. next time, try watching the series and/or reading the manga next time before you write.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 12, 2004
    Pretty good considering :) And it looks like you plan for more...oooooo :)
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  • From Crissy on April 11, 2004
    why the hell hasn't anyone reviewed this yet! I like this fic! Can you make chapter please?!
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