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Reviews for Do You Want To Live Forever?-New Chpt 10-6-5

By : Lin

From ANON - RyuYoukai on June 20, 2006
Hey! Just love your stories, I've even read the 'Bad Kid' at least thirty times, I can never get enough of it! This story is like that too. Anyway, I hope your doing okay and will soon be able to update, if not...well, I'm willing to wait! Ja Ne!
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From ANON - Maruading Storyteller on February 10, 2006
Hey, I love this story and wanted to get the full version of it. I hope you updateit soon!
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From ANON - Maruading Storyteller on February 10, 2006
Hey, I love this story and wanted to get the full version of it. I hope you updateit soon!
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From ANON - best_ever on January 06, 2006
I can't believe you disgraced the good name of Rurouni Kenshin with vampires. Fucking vampires. The most useless and annoying monster ever thought of. I hate the real thing almost as much as those poseur hot-topic douche bags who think they're vampires. To be the living dead, you have to die, and I would love to be the one to show them that. Assholes. But I'm getting off topic, what I'm trying to say is....... just like vampires themselves, this fic sucks. ^_^
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From ANON - Keikyo1Angel on December 27, 2005
I must confess that when I first came across your story I was a bit adament on reading it; lets just say I skimmed over it, and thought that I wouldnt like it due to the fact that I felt that I had read enough Kenshin/Karou dark vampire fanfics...maybe its b/c the other ones did not entice me enough or keep my interest and sadly I assumed the same about yours...I do not know why I decided to try out your story, but I do know that I am very glad that I did so. Your work is by far the best I have seen in fanfiction when it comes to bringing out characters (even if they are a lil OOC) and you bring them out with such emotion, its as if I could feel what the character at that moment is feeling, seeing the scenes unfold right before my eyes. That is the work of a great author...one who brings out the emotion and the feelings to where the reader can feel everything about the story. You have a gift in writing, a very good gift. I say keep up the great work, because the more you do, the better youll become. Thanks for keeping me on my toes!!
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From ANON - grug on October 15, 2005
Dude, A MASOCHIST is someone who LIKES TO HURT THEMSELVES. What you're referring to is a sadist. SADISTS are the ones who LIKE TO HURT OTHER PEOPLE.
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From ANON - girl from ipanema on October 07, 2005
Welcome back! This was very nice. Suspensefull, nice flow, vivid imagery but not over the top. Characters in character. I always said this is your best. Takes a lot of work I am sure but the result are quite satisfying. I hope your life is getting more in order. It is difficult to be creative when everything is spinning around you. Good work!
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From ANON - paisita on October 07, 2005
well hello my friend, i finally deside that i'm going to continue writing my reviews here in adultff. jejejejej i like more the uncut version that you have here.
i read that you are fealing better, i'm glad and totally happy for that, you have become like a very close friend to me and i wanted to write you a letter the last time you updated which was the las two ch from the Bad Kid, but i was unable to find you e-mail address, sorry i really wanted to wrote you something, i still want to so please send me you e-mail i want to talk to you.
ok now lets talk about the ch I TOTALLY LOVE IT you know very well that i'm crazy in love with this story, and i was waiting for an update, i loved the way that cell protected kaoru ahhhhhhhhhhh it so cutte, and how aoshi cursed ajajajajaja that man has such a ice prince characteristic that it make it sound funny, or saito and tokyo i love that couple i still think that saito is way to good to be the bad guy jajajajajajaja, and arturo damn he did find his mate very quick but i'm happy for him as well, now about his italian, spaniar or potuguese languague wich right now i don't remember from were is he from i found two little errors but don't worry only those who know the language will notiece but if you are wondering wich are the errors well since arture was talking to HER feminie form you dont say queridO beacuse thats for masculine, what you say is QUERIDA with an A at the end wich is for feminine, but don't worry about it.
now i definitely hope to hear from you soon
lov paisita
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From ANON - Kaoru Kato on June 25, 2005
Please take your time and focus on your life, I will be anxiously waiting for you to write an other chapter of this story. Also please accept my condolences, your note really made me understand that there is more to life and we need to take care or life will pass us by. mnoho ��astia! d'akujem
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From ANON - catti-dono on June 06, 2005
My sincereiss apologies to Tsuki-sama...This baka was soo out of line....so out of her juristiciton...she did not know what she was doing..one could state that she was possessed....she humbly kneels down in supplication...she apologises totally....Im soooo sorry...please forgive this unworthy one...
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From ANON - girl from ipanema on May 24, 2005
The first note I refused to answer. It was whiny, defeatist and a let down but fanfiction is a voluntary act and NOBODY has the right to complain when the writer decides to stop. This note however I will answer. This fic is the BEST thing you EVER wrote. It has plot, flow and good characters. ALL of your other fics are NOT even close. Some are over the top, others have flaky plots, others still the characters are out of wack. This one, on the other hand, has it all. That is probably why it is so hard to write. because it is extremely good. When I saw you were going to quit the best thing you ever wrote, I just shook my head and kept my mouth shut. Now, something this good does take intellectual energy and if you don't have the emotional balance it is not goint to work no matter how much you try. So, put on hold, put your head back into shape and get back to it when you feel steady again. Best wishes.
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From ANON - Galadriel Gryffindor on May 24, 2005
Hey,

I'm glad to hear that you'll still be working on this story. I've been enjoying it quite a bit. I'm sorry people have been giving you a hard time, and that I've never had the chance to review before. (I normally copy and paste your chapters to read offline, that's why I haven't). I hope you feel better soon, and I'll be looking forward to reading you again!
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From ANON - mz.amber eyes on May 24, 2005
[gives hard look]

linda.

do not let these people get to you. it's just the frikken internet. writing IS for yourself. they should be grateful that you're even posting or that you're actually the type of person that cares. be a little more of a bitch. these fuckheads think they can hurt you for no good reason? well fuck them linda. i know you're going through some hard times. sort that through first. get through everything you need to before you think that you're ready to write again.

take care.

much love
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From ANON - Carebear on May 24, 2005
Oh! For the love of all that is holy! I can't believe that someone has the gall to insinuate that fanfic writer's life has to revolve around fanfiction. Life does NOT � I repeat does NOT � revolve around fanfiction. And, shame on anyone who says that it does.

Normally I prefer to stay out of these kinds of petty disputes, but I will not stand by and let such a talented author be bad-mouthed by someone who�s obviously ungrateful to the amount of hard work, thought, and effort that she puts into all of her stories.

Now, before I get started off on a tangent, I�d like to say that it is okay for a reviewer to show concern when they think an author may be discontinuing one of their favorite stories. However, it is not okay to belittle an author for that same fear. Showing concern and asking questions regarding that concern are acceptable. Belittling and bad-mouthing an author just because they have fallen short of a reviewer�s expectations is always, for whatever the reason, wrong. And, no author deserves to be derided by a reviewer for these reasons, especially since the author will ALWAYS have a life outside of fanfiction. A reviewer cannot expect an author to drop everything in their life to fit their needs. Having such expectations is not just wrong, it is idiotic.

To clear up some of the air, KanzenNeTsuki never said she was discontinuing, �Do You Want To Live Forever?� Her author�s note in chapter 20 said, �I don�t know how long it will be between updates. It is hard to get inspiration these days, and it is such a complex story. But I promise to see it to the end no matter how long it takes.� All that means is that sometimes circumstances in life � whether they are serious or not � can make it difficult to write, a.k.a. writer�s block. It happens to all of us. It doesn�t mean that an author is going to quit writing. All Tsuki is asking for is �some time to get a few things in her life finished and settled before she feels she can tackle this story again.� Which is all any reader/reviewer should ever expect from an author, and they should NEVER expect any more.

And, if, by chance, an author gets to enjoy the privilege of writing a novel that will one day be published, then that too takes precedence over fanfiction. Why? Because that is money being made that goes toward feeding/supporting/clothing an author and his/her family, which is another one of those things in life that most definitely comes before fanfiction.

Fanfiction is purely a hobby. Some write fanfiction for fun, others write it as a way of exercising their writing skills, and there are a variety of other reasons that people write fanfiction. But, the bottom line is that no one writes fanfiction to feed to the whim of their reviewers.

So, Tsuki write as you please. I have been following this story and �Bad Kid� from the beginning, and at times I have read your profile on FFN as well as other author�s notes you have written, so I know you are going through a tough time. And, though I am one of those ones that are guilty of hardly ever leaving a review, please know that I love all your stories. You are a very gifted and talented writer, so don�t ever let a misguided reviewer�s disgruntled comments drag you down. I�ll also be here when you get back. So, go take care of your family as well as yourself and don�t worry about the rest of us. We love you and support you and wish you the best.

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From ANON - JBella on May 23, 2005
I can't believe the insensitivity of people sometimes.

I've read your a/n's on several of your stories. You have some major things happening in your life right now. You need to take care of those things. It IS that simple. Trust me, most of us understand that. As for those who don't, they're just gonna have to find a way to deal with it. As far as I'm concerned, you have a talent you have generously shared with everyone here. You've freely given hours of entertainment to readers who love your fics. You don't owe us a thing. We owe you. Do what you have to do, take care of your family, find your inspiration where you can, and come back soon. We'll still be here.

BTW, my sincerest condolences on your cat's passing. 19 years is a good life; she must have been a very happy girl.
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