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Reviews for Do You Want To Live Forever?-New Chpt 10-6-5

By : Lin
  • From ANON - mz.ambereyes on October 25, 2004
    oh miee gaht!!! i have to speak all asianish because thats how great my shock is. i can't believe you were continueing this story and i didn't know!! jesus christ, but i'm happy. it is, after all, an amazing story. update soon, my friend. we just have to start contacting each other! my aim sn is 'lookmomitzacow' on aim. let me know if you have one, my email is 'lookmomitzacow@yahoo.com'. ciao, beb ^_~
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  • From ANON - De Lazy Lady Lime on October 25, 2004
    Aloha Oka!
    !
    Hawaii...while not my origin, I so wish I was there...However I am a decendent of a people who live in a in a vast dessert resting on the side of a moutain, not of a foreign country. Why, The Great SouthWest ofcourse! The westest part of Texas you can get!. I'm awfully fond of the Aloha. its so haand and friendly, ne?

    WOW everything makes sense! I know where the Made came from and why they exisit! Cause dummies drank too much!...BAH! SANO AND MEGUMI CAN join Kensand and stand at his side!! SUGOI!! Sou da ne?

    I was getting rather worried about cha since I hadn't seen any new chappies from ya! Thas ok I'll always take time out of my now busy schedule to sit down and read a good ficlet!

    Lots of Love and Prayers,
    De Lazy Lady Lime
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  • From ANON - lere on October 25, 2004
    Oh, YESSSSSSSS!!!!!! New chapter and clues. Now things are becoming clear. This fic is complex and full of informations, but I love the dark side of the moon.
    I'm very happy to know things are better to you, my dear friend. I was very worried about your health. My mom is sick too, and I know how the family can be a caos in situations like this.

    Big hugs, sensei!!!!
    Love you!!!!!

    Lere
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  • From ANON - Linwe on October 25, 2004
    OMG. I didn't read the previous chapter, 'cause I just knew it would leave me hanging (I was right) so I waited for the next chapter - this one. But what an ending!!! OMG!! I love the little ....expsositions? that you put before each chapter. And that scene between Lilith and Pythagoras's fimeetmeeting, that was great.

    I love your story, it's absolutely on my constantly-reread-and-top-favorites List. Your other story, "The Bad Kid", is another top-of-the-list favorite of mine. I hope you can update that one soon too.

    I hope you keep writing; it's like ... watching a miracle be born on paper.

    Always a fan (even if I'm too lazy to review),

    ~Linwe
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  • From ANON - girl from ipanema on September 18, 2004
    Just a note: gomennasai is written with ai in the end. Just spell any japanese word as if it was spanish. they use the same sylllables.
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  • From ANON - De Lazy Lime on September 13, 2004
    Aloha Okaasan!

    OMG! HE'S COMING!!

    Wow I can feel the terror in them! I want to run and hide myself but then I remember that this is only fiction...
    Your way with words leaves me gapping in the air like a fish out of water! I am in such awe of your literary art!
    THANKYOU!! It's going to take me a few minutes to get the hair on the back of my neck to calm down!! PLEASE DON'T Leave us hanging on that type of ending for too long!!

    Lots of Love and Prayers,
    De Lazy Lime

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  • From ANON - catti-dono on September 13, 2004
    Blessed be Kami!! That last part was fabulous!!! You must be feeling well to give us two updates on two of your stories (does a flip)!! Soooo, whats next?!?!?!? Do I hear an update for Black Hawke????? Go head people!!! ask nicely, Tsuki-sama we want an update on BlackHawke (by the way people you can read that on MediaMiner.org under the name of Mangetsu') HAHA must throw in another plug (DODGES TSUKI-SAMA'S BOKEN) (OUCH!!).

    Love Ya (kudos to cameron-chan)!!!

    Bows and bangs head on tatama

    catti-dono (baka deshi)
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  • From ANON - Kao-gurl on September 13, 2004
    I love it! Ken isn is so cool!:) I cannot wait til the next chapter. Update soon. I cannot wait to find out what happens next. Do you have any idea how long this story will be?
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  • From ANON - lere on September 13, 2004
    I told you before, but I'll tell again!!!!! You made a monster!!! A sexy monster!!!! I love Kenshin like that!!! The eyes, the hair, huuuummmmmm!!!! I think I'm a monster too, hehe.

    Wonderful chapter sensei, like allways! But I want to know how Kenshin turned Cel and why is he like that. Will Kaoru be able to calm him????

    Big hugs from Brazil!!!

    Lere
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  • From ANON - girl from ipanema on September 13, 2004
    Ho, ho, ho, this suspense is KILLING me!. I have been waiting for this encounter FOREVER. 'nough said.
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  • From ANON - tease-me on September 11, 2004
    you still haven't updated??? pleeeeease update!
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  • From ANON - tease-me on August 31, 2004
    I LOVE THIS FIC SOOO MUCHH!
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  • From ANON - Nguardian on August 27, 2004
    I am sooo sorry that I did not review for the last chapter, at least not on this archive. I was going to but I think I just kept putting it off and by the time I realized that I hadn't the next chapter was up. Not that I am complaining or anything, I just feel bad that I haven't kept up with my own commitments when it comes to reviewing. But I figured I better do this now or I will forget again. Both chapters were really good. The moment between Soujiro and Kaoru was really touching, and the sibling bond was portrayed really well. Although brothers and sisters fight there is always that bond of care and love that is not easily broken between them. Though if my bro. knew that I was g hig his computer at this moment he would've a lot to say about brother sister bonds. lol.
    As for this new chapter, I can't wait to see how the clans are going to react to him. Though I do believe that Kaoru will be able to calm him down once they see each other again. His soul is crying out for comfort only she can give him. So until next time.
    Later.
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  • From ANON - Kaoru-ch on February 29, 1920
    ^O^ yes!!!!!!!!!!! AN NEW CHAPTER ^^X.... OH LINDA-SAMA do not worry aboue lee letter so much, you are not the worst penpal in the world, you are one of my absolute favorites su !!! ( sigh i've been reading to much Pita-Ten manga) I can't for your letter, it's been quit a while and i am growing excited with eacj day thats passes ^^' .... so don't worry yourself about it and please enjoy yourself you work way to hard ne. I luved the chappie and i will try not to strangle you for the next chapter any time soon. ( hint hint *must have new chapter* lol) Talk with ya later watery su !!!!


    Kaoru-chan ^^x / BabyKaoru-sama
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  • From ANON - girl from ipanema on August 22, 2004
    As Megumi san would say: "Ho, ho, ho." Hiko will not know what hit him, poor thing. I've been waiting for this meeting for ages. Make it good. And thanks for updating often. There are so many good stories out theret a t a left unfinished, sigh.
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