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Reviews for Do You Want To Live Forever?-New Chpt 10-6-5

By : Lin
  • From ANON - De Lazy Lime on August 22, 2004
    Ooooh aahhh! So, 'Cel' is like a vamp'ed-out version of Battousai? I like!! I like alot!!
    I was wondering how Kenshin was going to tthe the whole 'death of a policeman on his hands' thing. So far I like the way he's handling it.

    OMG!! I can't wait to read the next chappie!! There sur hel hell are going to be alot of super surprised people.
    I am curious though, since Kaoru is 'The Source' would that possibly bring her rank to be above her father and Aoshi? Since she is Mate to The f Lea Leader, I just sort of assume that things will be changing alot for her and every on else of course.

    Anway, Love the action and YAY! Sano and Megumi interaction! Wonder how Megumi's going to handle this. Ya know I was thinking... Did you smell something burning? Yah that was my light bulb burning my hair!
    Anyway, I was wondering is it at all possible to change the way a "made" is created so that it is not bad and has more sense, I mean it has to be super complicated so not everyone can do it, I ask this b/c I think the "made" is a good idea but I wish there was a way to make them better, you know so Sano and Megumi could join if they want too. I love them too much to leave them out completely...OH Another idea!! Maybe Kenshin could do it!! I mean make "clean made" Then Sano would be more poweful and better able to help Kenshin and still be his partner, he would be like Kenshin sort of Half human half vamp... Anyway, just thought I'd tell ya what I was thinking, this happens alot you know.. the whole thinking thin

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    OH!! WHERE IS MISAO!?! I miss her happy bouncy face!

    *whew* ah well I went a little loooong there. Uh well I love the pace you bring out the chappies! And I think I will pop over to Media Miner and check out what you've got there.. tee hee!

    Lots of Prayers and love!
    De Lazy Lime
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  • From ANON - Samuria on August 21, 2004
    I absolutely love your story you have a talent for creating a fealing of suspence. Please update soon!

    P.S. You're fight seans are amazeing
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  • From ANON - MZ.AMbER EYES on August 18, 2004
    awww... i wasn't mentioned...

    ah well, i'm really glad that you've decided to continue this fic! it's an awesome story ^____^

    and i was wondering...maybe you could write a lemon for 'the bad kid'...no? :p

    update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Kaoru-chan on August 16, 2004
    I never get sick of reading this chapter ^^x
    I hope another will be out soon



    Kaoru-chan ^^^^^^(ja,ne Linda-sama)^^^^^^^^
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  • From ANON - Sephiress on August 16, 2004
    heya tsuki-san

    great to see u have updated over here on aff.net, and i hope there isnt as much trouble here in the future

    the chappie was great. it makes me all the more anticipated for kenshin's grand entrance in front of kaoru's family and the rest of the 'clan'. the part with soujiro was heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time, he being a favorite of mine.

    keep up the great work
    Sephiress

    p.s. i was a lil disappointed not seeing my name in the review responses ;_;...lol no worries id think i could be mad for sumthin little like that!
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  • From ANON - Ian on August 16, 2004
    HAHAHAHAHA!!!! FINALLY!! TAHNK YOU THE CHAPTER! I found only a few mistakes but hardly noticable. NOW PLEEEEEEEASE HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
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  • From ANON - polaris-fire-star on August 16, 2004
    Yes! You finally went back and told us what happened to Karou and Sou.
    ME SOOO HAPPY!!!!
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  • From ANON - lere on August 16, 2004
    Hey sensei! I already sent a review about this chapter at FF.net, but...well... You are the best, so you deserve TWO reviews!!! Hehe! I hope you liked the links I sent you about the doujinshi. Those are HOT! HENTAI Lere!!!!

    Big hugs from Brazil, my dear friend!!!

    Lere
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on July 23, 2004
    That last chapter was very well written. I'm really creeped out. By the way,
    he scares me.

    I hope you soon get back to Kaoru and her family, 'cause you kinda left them
    hanging. Ah, who am I trying to kid? I just want more Kenshin/Kaoru smut.

    Until next time Tsuki-san!

    CybrEm
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  • From ANON - Clemen on July 17, 2004
    Sorry, I haven't written a reviw. I'll been so busyely.ely. Sorry, my friend. Just finish reading the last chapter and I must say, I hate it when you leave us hanging like that. Please update soon. Ahh yes, I been working on my fanfic, I'll going to send it you soon as I can, hopefully, you like. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
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  • From ANON - Nguardian on July 16, 2004
    That was an awesome chapter. If Saitou was really the evil villain then this is exactly how I would picture him. Ruthless, but at the same time loyal and faithful to those who have given their allegiance and fidelity to him.
    So we finally get an incite into the workings of The Black Diamond, I can hardly wait for the confrontation between Him and The Mighty Fang of Pythagoras. It should be a glorious battle.
    Well I have not much to say, other than to say that I hope you get your much needed rest and not to let everything consume you.
    Well until your next up, I , I wish you much luck.
    Later.

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  • From ANON - De Lazy Lime on July 14, 2004
    SWEET!
    Oh I love Saitou as the bad guy! He is such a good leader! Your character portrayal was in my opinion In Character too.

    Man you are such a good author... I must admit tho I'm still to stuck on K/K and RK in general, and don't read any other anime fanficlets, I think for you I'll probably sway. Cause I know it will be REALLY good stuff.

    Much Love to ya!
    De Lazy Lime

    (Is it okay if I call ya Oka-san?)

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  • From ANON - Claudia on July 14, 2004
    This is a great story! Fine plot and characterisations. Since it's an AU the fact that Kaoru and her clan are headquartered on an abandoned Ellis Island is not a problem. If I remember right Ellis Island WAS abandoned for several decades before it was made a national park/historic site. Guess in this reality it wasn't, if I remember right the original money for it's restoration was part of the money raised to repair/refurbish the Statue of Liberty, so I guess fortunately for Kaoru & clan there just wasn't enough money to restore both Ellis Island and Lady Liberty. ;-)
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  • From ANON - lere on July 13, 2004
    So, the monster is coming??? And Shishio? He is a surprise! But I really can't wait to read about Knshin and Kaoru again! They are so sexy here and I'm missing your lemons already... he he... HENTAI LERE!!!!!! Oh, eeeewwwww! The teeth part was disgusting. It was like the canibals in those old movies. Give me creeps.

    Big hugs evil sensei, because you really showed your fangs here!

    Lere
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on July 13, 2004
    Sensei Tsuki-sama :

    Another fabulous chappy! Should have known you would have snuck in shishio into the picture; evil laugh!!! Where is Yahiko; personanlly, I think he should be made into Kenshin's loyal lap-dog (sorry did I ever tell you that I cant stand Yahiko??) Giggles evilly but really, Tsuki-sama great reading, keep it up!!!

    Forehead to the floor in respect

    catti
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