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Reviews for Do You Want To Live Forever?-New Chpt 10-6-5

By : Lin

From ANON - Knid on June 18, 2004
I hate to tell you this, but your information on Ellis Island is completely wrong. Long ago, it was abandoned and falling apart but the main processing center was renovated and opened as a museum in 1990, operating under the aegis of the National Park Service. There are thousands of visitors every day. I've spent an entire day there myself. I am enjoying the fic, but when I hit something that I know is wrong it just throws me right out of the story. You might have better luck using Governors Island which is nearby and was off-limits to the public for 200 years.
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From ANON - Nguardian on June 17, 2004
My friend, my dear friend. How could you say such things, such as dumping this fic. You have got to be crazy. Maybe your just saying that so all of us fools who don't write reviews will be forced to, in order to beg you not to dump this incredibly imaginative and blood-filled story.

I am a huge fan of all types of vampire tales. My oldeotheother calls me 'the expert'. I don't think that I am but I guess compared to everyone else that he has met I am. lol.

It seems I've found where you keep your more risque fics at. That's pretty cool. It's probably better to put the darker ones here instead of putting them on Fanfiction.net, being that they there is some limits as to how far one can go in their stories.

I think that this is an awesome story, and don't you dare think about dumping it or I will have to track you down, and be like Kaoru and knock some sense it to you. (just kidding) But seriously you cannot give up on this story.

I like how you made the 'made' (that sounds really weird) allergic to roses that was a nice touch.

Well until you next update. And I eagerly await it. Good luck and happy writing (or not depending on how you look at it).

Later.
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From ANON - Sephiress on June 16, 2004
absolutly incredible. this fiction has turned out to be one of the best pieces of work i have ever read. this lastest chapter was especially fun to read. i love the way you have kenshin's 'aura' so incredibly strong, that kaoru's own father can't even 'touch' her. and also the way every1 finds out about Cel through his precense and Aoshi's remark "For the love of the 'One'" is also genius.

please update quickly on this. i am addicted to your writing and feel so honored that you like to read my stories on fanfiction.net. will misao and megumi make appearances? i hope so, as i am a sucker for A/M

another excellant chapter

much luv
Sephiress
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From ANON - Polaris-fire-star on June 15, 2004
NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! NOT A CLIFFY!! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Update soon. I'm begging you. PPLLEEAASSEE!!
Polarise-ste-star
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From ANON - SamuraiX_Koneko on June 10, 2004
No please don't stop writing this story!!! It's incredible! I check every other day for updates ( okay I'm not a stalker, I just love this story) There's only a few great Kenshin/ Vampire cross-overs and this is definitely one of them. I can't wait to see more K+K fluff/action. I've been reading this since the very beginning and it would be a shame if you stopped now.
I LOVE YOUR STUFF!,
SamuraiX_Koneko
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From ANON - De Lazyeʨ e on June 10, 2004
NU NU NU!! Please Don't trash it! I love it! I really love it! Keep it going! I really like the whole mushy Kaoru bit. I suppose that having 'Cel' as your mate would sent you of to La La Land. I'm curious as to what is going to happen next. If you are losing interest in your story line... maybe you should try a one-short. I know you can't post in different colors but try typing in different stories. I LOVE LEMON and LIME! And you are MY FAVORITE AUTHOR! I check everyday..no matter how sleepy I am to see if you updated..both her and on FF.net. So PLEASE for the sake of your REAL fans don't give up cause the jerks won't review. You have 1845 hits at 1:26 central time on the morning of June 10th. I think that's not bad! Just think if they put a hit counter on FF.net your other stories would have many more than that I think... I'm trying to talk some positivity to ya! I REALLY do love your writting. SO please don't stop! Don't make me beg, cause I'll do it.

As always your silly fan,

De Lazy Lime
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From ANON - lere on June 10, 2004
Hey sensei! I'm very confuse here: wasn't Hiko Kenshin's grandfather??? Now he is Kaoru father too??? And why Kenshin is not with Kaoru to tell the others about the arrive of the one??? Kaoru is his aunt???? Please, I'm lost after the last chapter. Can you explain the family bonds? Anyway, I'm glad you have found time to write another chapter and I'll be waiting the answers to better understand the story.

Big hugs, my friend!

Lere
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From ANON - girl from ipanema on June 09, 2004
Oh, poor thing, here is one review for you. This is wonderful and we appreciate you updating often. Thanks and keep up the good work. Aoshi sounds totally yummy.
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From ANON - twishinky on May 27, 2004
Tsuki-san... words escape me... beautiful!!!! Although Saitoh as a bad guy doesn;t sit with me well... but someone has to be the antihero, right? ;) UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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From ANON - twishinky on May 27, 2004
This is indeed different... you never cease to amaze me, tsuki-san, its like seeing the movie 'blade' and all the vampire chronicles of Anne Rice with Rurouni Kenshin characters rolled into one... Strange but wonderful... moving on to the other chapters... please, update!!!
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From ANON - De Lazy Lime on May 24, 2004
O.O Wow!

The blood and gore of chappie 6 was not to much and not to little. Made your skin crawl abit but not so bad that you have to skip a few sentences. I liked it.

Ah, Well, I think Kaoru KICKS ASS! and she does. I lOVE her character. I really hate it when people write her to be...scared...pathetic...Too much the damsel in distress. I mean it's good for her to be the damsel but she shoule be given due credit to atleast hold her own, when it gets to hard then Kenshin can save her and RAVISH her. Nice job on the "Ravishing" by the way. Although in summer heat, cold showers still won't help...much. I am NOT complaining in the least.
Now I really like the way you did Kenshin. AT FIRST GLANCE... I was affraid that he would be a little whiny or go over on the "I'm Not Worthy" bit, what with his reaction to what fate dealt him, But he seems to be taking it rather well. There is nothing more pathetic than a character or person who can't suck it up and deal with what ever life spits at them. Granted alot of what you get hit with maybe hard at first but there is always a way to get through.
Mou!, well I'm blahbering too much.

All and all a gold sticker and THANKYOU VERY MUCH for more wonderful chappies to stimilate the mind. And Keep up the GREAT WORK!! please!!!

Eternaly Greatful,
De Lazy Lime
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From ANON - CybrEmly01 on May 24, 2004
I like this one too. Supernatural romances are a weakness of mine.

*gives T-san-san a BIG snuggle* Sorry 'bout that, I've an overabundence of
affection at the moment. *grins and waggles eyebrows* Lucky you and VERY
lucky me. *giggles*

Oh, and I found my favorite of your new(er) reviewers. I like Dev. I have no
idea why, I just do. *shrug*

Update soon please!

Ja,
CybrEm
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From ANON - Nikki on May 24, 2004
*claps* Not only blood and gore, but wonderfully good sex! =) Gotta love everything you write, Tsuki-san!

Oh, I wrote an RK yuri fic! =) Tis Kaoru/Misao... I just felt as if I NEEDED to write something abnormal like that. Check it out if you feel like it! ^_^

Love,

Nikki
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From ANON - Deviation on May 24, 2004
Wow... *giggles* Normally I don't really keep tabs on RK fanfiction, but this one grabbed me, and the more I read, the more I can't help but keep reading. Your style is absolutely lovely... such raw emotion and feeling in it that I'm just amazed. The flow of the story is perfect and there's a fabulous balance in the dialogue and description. It's very clear and unique, and I was squealing when I saw you'd updated again. And what an upd LO LOL! Mou, that was amazing! I truly am in love with the way you tell a story, and I'm very grateful you decided to share your talent. *grins* Thank you very much for a wonderful read, and in advance for the continuation of this story. I love it. ^___^
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From ANON - lere on May 24, 2004
OOOOHHH!!HH!!! You never lost your touch! What a fantastic lemon! It was your best lemon, ever!!!!! I love the chapters! Kaoru fighting the cops at the aley was very good. And after that the mating was VERY HOT! I must congratulate you about Kaoru's profile. You took the risk and mada ger personality different from your others fics. And I think that was perfect. A vampire Kaoru must be different, she is not a kendoist Kaoru from ancient Japan. But yet you made her his sweet Kaoru when they were togheter: point again! I can't wait to read more because it keeps coming better andter.ter.

Big hugs my dear sensei!

Lere
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