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Reviews for Do You Want To Live Forever?-New Chpt 10-6-5

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  • From ANON - MZ.AMbER EYES on May 24, 2004
    ahh... much better ^____^ k&k initiated!! finally. haha, update soon!
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  • From ANON - girl from ipanema on May 24, 2004
    I laughed my head off with those poor cops. "Aliens" sounded really good at that point. And the joining was really good too. As I said before, you are giving Linay and "Broken Pieces" a run for their money.
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  • From ANON - Linwe on May 16, 2004
    AH!! More more!! This is getting so good! I like Sano's reaction to everything that's happening, he doesn't seem to be as much of a rooster-head as usual which is a nice change. And *Kenshin* - ::swoon::.

    I hope you get the next chapter up soon, I'm nearly dying of suspense!

    Keep writing please, you write so well!

    ~Linwe
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  • From ANON - Sephiress on May 13, 2004
    wow...amazing chapter! i cannot wait until kenshin meets kaoru. update quickly! this is just too good for words!
    ~Sephiress
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  • From ANON - MZ.AMbER EYES on May 13, 2004
    uhmmm... i dont know if you meant to or not, but that one scene with kenshin and his great grandmother was sort of like incest... kinda gross...

    ah well, anyways, soujirou's gf should burn in hell for making the police get enough hints to catch kaoru... and i dont know why you're making kaoru such a bitch...

    update soon!
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  • From ANON - lere on May 13, 2004
    Finally!FINALLY!!!! FINALLYYYYYYYYY!!!! My favorite couple togheter again!!!!!! I just can't wait to see THE MEETING!!!! I'm sooooooo exitated!!! And the amber eyes.... Battousai is here too! I love the story soo much! It's dark but sexy too. And Kaoru is OCC, but I love her strength and her strong caracter. She is his perfect match. Can't waiiiiit!!!!

    Love you! Big hugs, sensei!

    Lere
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  • From ANON - angua on May 13, 2004
    Wow, another amazing chapter, I want more! ^_^. I´m looking forward to read the next chapter (they meet finally!).
    angua
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  • From ANON - De Lazy Lime on May 13, 2004
    YAY YAY YAY YAY!!!

    MORE MORE MORE!!!

    I am so happy you updated... and now I can hardly wait for your next installment.

    THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU!!
    Ken-san to the rescue for Kaoru-chan! I imagine their meeting is going to be fairly interesting.

    Your Fan,
    De Lazy Lime
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  • From ANON - Waterflash on May 13, 2004
    Wheeeeeeeeee! I love this unfolding plot! It's downright awesome! YAY, KENSHIN AND KAORU FINALLY MEET IN THE NEXT CHAPTER! That means... we're one step closer to lemony stuff! =) GOOD JOB, KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!

    -Nikki-chan
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  • From ANON - Raithe on May 10, 2004
    I have to say, this story is one of the better ones I've read recently. It's refreshing to see someone put a new spin on both a general idea and the fandom. Keep up the good work, I look forward to more.
    On a related topic, a: have you seen Van Helsing, and b: have you ever read Laurell K Hamilton's "Anita Blake, Vampire Hunter" books?
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  • From ANON - MZ.AMbER EYES on May 02, 2004
    yes yes!!! its an update!!! and no no!! its a cliffie!!! update sooon!!!
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  • From ANON - Belle on May 01, 2004
    Very nice! I'm was so rooting for Kaoru, backing her up in the boxing ring. I wanted to slap some sense into her family. Why would they defend the other girl when she is obviously acting out of jealousy? Why didn't either her 'father' or brother have faith in her talents? She doesn't seem arrogant to me, and if she was she has every right to be! Bet they both feel dumb now after she had to explain everything to them as the idiotic men that they are! Ugh! Kenshin better step up to the plate and meet Kaoru soon. I bet that meeting will be awesome and I totally look forward to it! I enjoyed this chapter though, good job.
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  • From ANON - lere on April 30, 2004
    BRRRRRR! Kaoru was sooo scary! Why is she so hotheaded? She was like Battousai (scary and cold) and like Saito too (rude). But i'm biting my nails to read about THE MEETING! Who? Kenshin and Kaoru, of course! Will Battousai be there later? Please, kgoingoing soon!

    Big hug sensei!

    lere
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  • From ANON - Kaoru-chan on April 30, 2004
    *slow motion* n-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    You ended it soooooooo fast ^^;;;;;;;; *cries* me want more ..... why does it end so fast ^^x



    Me loved it ... you must continue .
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  • From ANON - MZ.AMbER EYES on April 28, 2004
    where's kaoruuu??
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