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Reviews for Do You Want To Live Forever?-New Chpt 10-6-5

By : Lin
  • From ANON - Lexie on April 27, 2004
    This is promising to be an epic tale--with a glossary, no less! :) Very creative idea with great details. And I say the gorier and sexier the better! Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Belle on April 27, 2004
    Dang, Mara is wicked! I take it she is jealous of Kaoru, no doubt? That was cool about Kenshin being descendent of the vampire prince, I kind of saw it coming. =) Can't wait for him and Kaoru to meet though! I like Sanosuke too! This fic is super dark and gory, but I actually like that. I like horror movies. And while the scenes with the pimps are actualy lemons bc they aren't really important, I think you've written those parts well. I love vampire fictions! I think I'll try to check our your story on this sight now. :-D
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  • From ANON - Kagura on April 24, 2004
    I absolutely love Mara! She's a lot like Soujiro in some senses. The singing is kinda like his smiling. I think its awesome that Kaoru's a vampire seducer, and Kenshin's the one whose gonna be captivated (hopefully). I can't remember, but does Kenshin have his scar? I'll have to go back and check. And I learned a pretty cool fact about Vampires. 'Made' vampires cannot produce offspring because they're undead, and the dead can't support life. 'Born' vampires are living to a certain extent, and thus can produce offspring. Also, born vampires can produce children with living humans, but its very dangerous, as the child could be absorbed back into the womb, causing miscarriage, which if the mother was human, is harmless. But if the mother was a vampire, she would most likely die, because a vampire cannot absorb the entire life force (the soul and body) of a human without being purified.

    Oh shit, I'm babbling now. Jell, Ja ne, great story, expecting more
    Kagura
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  • From ANON - MZ.AMbER EYES on April 23, 2004
    as usual, loved it!!
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  • From ANON - lere on April 22, 2004
    I'm late, I know, I know... but my computer was realy crazy for two days!!!! Anyway, the new chapter is sooooo cool! I thought the vampire was Kaoru! And Kenshin is the one, humll, ll, he is always the one for me, he he he... But now I'm biting my nails to see what will happen from now on: the war, the caracters, romance, LEMONS!!!!!! Shivers running down my spine.... Lere is a hentai!!!

    Big hugs my friend!!

    lere
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  • From ANON - Waterflash on April 21, 2004
    AWESOME-NESS! That was soooo cool! KENSHIN'S A HALF VAMPIRE DUDE! YAYYYYYYYYYYY! When will Kenshin and Kaoru meet? I'm just curious. I love how you added that Romanian! It really madeseemseem realistic. I'll be waiting for the next chapter soon!!!

    LOVE YA, TSUKI-SAN!

    -Nikki-chan
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  • From ANON - SamuraiX_Koneko on April 17, 2004
    This is Kickass! I'm assuming that's Kaoru who just killed the guy. It's really edgy and awesome. Can't wait to see more! Please update as quick as you can!!!!
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on April 14, 2004
    I really liked chapt 2, could the coroner by Megumi? by chance? Can Kenshin's grandfather actually be Crede? Im still trying to picture Kenshin with glasses, humm. Chapt 2 misspell (nimble not nuble, sorry, one of my jobs is to spell check for doctors).

    Arigato for the start of a great story. Bows to the great one.

    Catti-dono

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  • From ANON - Clemen on April 14, 2004
    Wow cool idea. I want to see where you take this fic. Hey maybe after this fic, you could write a Aoshi and Kaoru fic???? No matter, I'll read anything you write. Thanks for the e-mail. Can't wait to read the next chaper. Hopefully I'll read it sooner and not later. Until then take care, and God bless.
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  • From ANON - Kaoru-chan on April 14, 2004
    WOW the second was great alsoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo *falls out of chair* I must READ MORE!!!!!!!!!! NEEED...WANT...*eyes pop out* MUST HAVE>>>>>>



    ~~~~~Kaoru-chan/BabyKAoru-sama~~~~~~
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  • From ANON - Kaoru-cahn on April 14, 2004
    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LUV it ^^x

    heheheheheh... you always have magnificent stories... I can also always count on you for a good story^^x because everything you write is pure at heart 0.o ( I know... im a butt kisser LOL, IM always trying to get stories out of ya) LOL




    ~~~Kaoru-cahn/BabyKaoru-sama~~~~

    *You are really true at heart*
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  • From ANON - angua on April 14, 2004
    The storyline is fantastic, as always. I generally don´t like vampire´s stories, but yours have now all my interest. I looking forward to read more!.
    angua
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  • From ANON - Waterflash on April 14, 2004
    YAYYYYYYYY! MORE RK FICS FROM TSUKI-SAN!!!!!! =) Lemme guess, Kenshin/Kaoru and Sano/Megumi?

    PLEASE WRITE MORE BEFORE YOU KILL ME! o_O As long as you don't bite . AH. AH, NO BITING! XD

    -Nikki-chan
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  • From ANON - MZ.AMbER EYES on April 14, 2004
    gaahhh!! i love it!!!
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  • From ANON - lere on April 13, 2004
    jaw droped! Huge eyes out of their sockets! Trembling hands and knees! HOW CAN YOU DO THAT???? It will always be a mistery to me how far you can go. It's amazing! Another fantastic story! MY GOD, I just can't wait to read more. Please, don't torture me! Soon!

    You are the best!

    Bear hugs from Brazil!

    lere
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