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Reviews for Portrait Without Sin

By : animeyaoi
  • From ANON - wildefyre on May 11, 2004
    Man you really know how to pull the emotions out of people. Excellent chapter! I still adore Dee and always will. I know that his actions are due to his pain and as a way to protect himself from even further pain, that's understandable. After all, when we hurt we don't think on a rational level and you've captured that throughout thtorytory. It just drives me nuts that Dee has never given Ryo the chance to explain himself, and that may be due to Dee's personality of being blunt, honest and stubborn. You have done such a great job with this storyline and it's such a refreshing break from the 'Dee sees Ryo, Ryo runs away, Dee catches Ryo, they fall in love' scenario. Thank you! I applaud you for such an exceptionally written story and will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Raininglike_tears on May 10, 2004
    Does that mean Dee didn't do anything with Derek? Seems he didn't go out on the town after all. Kind of endearing (sorry can't think of another word except stalker, but I don't want it to be that) even though he won't allow himself to be with Ryo (or visa versa) to still have the need to be somewhat close to him (it being their anniversary after all). Ryo's like a little puppy that I just want to scoop up and cuddle him myself.... hummm... I'd want to do that even if he wasn't grieving as he is. ^_^ And Bikky! I like that he has feelings on both sides. I know the manga has him mostly, usually fighting with Dee or foiling his plans to be with Ryo, but there are times that there's other thoughts about the man, after all Dee has helped save him a few times too.

    Yes, I babble (alot) sometimes ^_^! Anyway do love your story. Waiting patiently (biting fingernails) for your next chapter.....
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  • From ANON - Julia on May 10, 2004
    AW! I'm loving this!! The DRAMA!! I have a feeling it's not going to get happier any time soon. Keep it up!!!
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on May 10, 2004
    I loved the title! Separate Together. Each one involved in their own 'grief' or 'loneliness', yet they were actually there doing it with each other. Kind of like "So near, yet still so far away". So Dee's night on the town wound up sitting around nearby Ryo's place, yet couldn't bring himself to go to him, huh? Or was there time to have fooled around with that Derek guy and that's just were he wound up? I tend to think he skipped out on Derek. I like what you're writing with Bikky too. Be waiting for your next update.....
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 10, 2004
    Could it be that Dee is willing to listen to Ryo and forgive him? I hope so!!! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - JazzyGirl on May 10, 2004
    Wow...Dee's about ready to give in! I hope he and Ryo talk it through and that everything works out! It has to end happily...it just has to! *cry* Another great job! I anxiously await the next chapter! :D
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  • From ANON - Hong Mee on May 10, 2004
    WOW! That was short but oh so lovely. I'm SO ready for them to finally be together!!! Although that undoubtedly will bring the end to this awesome fic. How bitter sweet. Keep updating when you can!

    And again, when you finish this one, start another!! You're so talented! Don't stop!

    :-D
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  • From ANON - magget on May 10, 2004
    OMG I LOVE THIS....you rarely find any of these online...very well written *claps*....have Ryo try to kill himself...but not succeed...and leave behind a really sad note for Dee....that'll make him feel bad...hehehe....*is an evil bitch*....ok...keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Devi on May 10, 2004
    I'm looking forward to see how this will end. Of course, I'd love for Dee and Ryo to patch things up, and part of me hopes that will happen. But...at the same time a sad ending would be an interesting twist in the world of FAKE fanfiction. Whatever you've decided, I'm sure it'll be great!
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  • From ANON - Kit_Yang on May 10, 2004
    Poor Dee...Poor Ryo...I'm not gonna stand up for this anymore! They should just seperate and go their own ways! If it's going to hurt this much, I'm never gonna read another lovey-dovey or heart breaking Ryo and Dee story ever again!!! I'm losing it...hahhahahhaha I wish I could do that, but I love those two! So, whatever happens, happens...just as long as Derek doesn't get any action, I'm pretty much happy! *hides on top of a building with a sniper rifle* So, since you are the author I'd like you to have the honors of giving Derek fair warning. You go and tell him that if he tries anything funny, his ass is capped, got it? Hahahhahhaha I'm such a nerd! But anyways, thanks four sur support! I'm updating all my stories by writing them on paper which is a pain and then going to the public library and typing it all there and not to mention, uploading. I finished chapter 5 to Dee's Grimm Fairy Tales, so go check it out!
    Kit_Yang
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  • From ANON - Kit_Yang on May 09, 2004
    And your choice is....bum bum bum *you know, drums beating...hehehhehe* DUCK!!!! NO! Damn that Derek! I will chew him up and spit him out if he dares to take Dee from Ryo! I'm so mad! *heavy breathing* okay, okay..whew! It was sad at the end though! I cried, again! I hate myself! And THANK YOU for actually feeling sorry for me! I think you're the only one so far! I hate my computer! I wish I could smash it all up again! But have no FEAR! I will find a way to update my chapters, dammit! Sheesh, is it just me or do I souike ike I'm complaining? Must be me...Here's the good news though, I'm almost finished with my fifth chapter so I just have to find a way to upload it...anyways, sorry for blabbering...once again, GREAT JOB KID....I dig it! Hahhahhahahhah *^-^*
    Kit_Yang

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  • From ANON - KD on May 08, 2004
    I really want to give Dee a nice good punch on his face.. Why couldn't he listens to Ryo? Damn it.. Shit.. I'm taking it too personal.. Hey... keep udating!
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  • From ANON - JazzyGirl on May 08, 2004
    *looks around suspiciously* My computer crashed, so I had to use my dad's to read this. *sniffle* So sad...Ryo was so close to revealing his secret! ;_; The suspense is still killing me! Hurry with the next chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - muyoluv20 on May 08, 2004
    ;_; WAHHHH so sad poor ryo. damn dee for not listening >=( heh obvious ryo fan here ^o^
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  • From ANON - Hong Mee on May 08, 2004
    You bet I'm still with this! I just love it! Dee is such an ass sometimes, but understandable none the less. YAY! I can just smell an exciting climax coming around the corner. OOHHHH!! The wait is unbearable!

    MUST KEEP UPDATING ASAP!!
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