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Reviews for Portrait Without Sin

By : animeyaoi
  • From ANON - Kit_Yang on May 03, 2004
    This isn't cool man...I'm on the edge of my seat!!!! And damn, that was an awesome bitch slap! I was like, Go Ryo! Don't take crap from Dee even though you did mess everything up! But yes, I'm so proud of myself! I DIDN'T CRY ONCE!!! WHOO-HOO!!! I'm gonna go celebrate with some milk and cookies!!! ~does the cabbage patch~ *^-^*
    Kit_Yang
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  • From ANON - Wildefyre on May 03, 2004
    The one thing that stands out... What Ryo wrote on that paper! That got to me! This story has me on the edge of my seat waiting to see what else is going to happen. As for the 'bitch slap' we Ronin Warrior/ Samurai Trooper fans know that one all too well. *laughs*

    Anyway, keep up the awesome work... I'm looking forward to the next chapters!
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  • From ANON - Julia on May 03, 2004
    AAAHH! I love it! The drama! The drama! Update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Nikki on May 02, 2004
    Oh please, please update this! I think I'm addicted (::grin::) I don't think that this story is off base at all, particularly concerning Dee's reaction. In fact, I think that this sounds exactly like what he would do in this situation, especially considering the time in the manga when he backhanded ryo for a COMMENT. Yep, this seemse Dee Dee to me. Anyways, I really can't wait to see how this fic turns out, s please post more of this wonderful fic soon!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2004
    Will Dee and Ryo ever make up? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Hong Mee on May 02, 2004
    I think I got it!!!! I think I friggin' got it!!! I know what's gonna happen!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

    You're a GENIUS!! BRILLIANT!!! WHAT A PLOT! OMG! OMG! OMG!

    YES YES YES!! I JUST CAN'T HOLD IN MY EXCITEMENT!!!

    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! MUST READ THE END... MUST READ THE END...

    *shakes computer violently*
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  • From ANON - Hong Mee on May 02, 2004
    FUCKING FANTASTIC!!! I feel so sorry for Dee!! Usually all these angsty dramas have Dee as the "bad one" and it's about time Ryo got his share. Dee was always my favorite! (Well... besides JJ that is, out of Ryo and Dee it's Dee for me!) So I'm glad he's got pride enough to move away. YAY!! I think this has been my favorite chapter thus far.

    *takes tissues* Thanks because I needed them!

    When you finish this one, not that I don't like this one because you know I do, start another!! And make it slightly more happier, ne? Unless angst is your thing that is.
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on May 02, 2004
    Darn it, what is there left for me to say? I like how you go back and retell the story with the other's view point. You just see Dee's actions with Ryo being the one suffering. And now get get to see what's going on with Dee too and understand that he's just not turned his back on Ryo, it's because he's dealing with the hurt he feels too. Especially feeling that he's been betrayed like that. I caught mine like that before, and it hurt real bad, but I should have been more resistant instead of giving in so easy.

    Well, I'll be waiting for your next chapter....
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  • From ANON - JazzyGirl on May 01, 2004
    *cry* That's so sad! Poor Dee...he's hurting so much! I kind of have an idea of what may be going on between Ryo and Armon. I'm dying of suspense for the next chapter! Great, GREAT job so far! This is an excellent fic! :D
    ~JazzyGirl~
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  • From ANON - Lychee on May 01, 2004
    Oh dear god, you're killing me here!! The suspense is giving me an ulcer! Oh, the agony!! Please, write faster!! I just want them back together!! C'mon, Ryo! Just tell him what you were doing! Dee, did you not notice the title of this fic? How big a clue do you want? Jeesh! As if Ryo could ever cheat on you. *sigh* Okay, fine, I'll just sit here and wait...
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  • From ANON - Kit_Yang on May 01, 2004
    Dammit! I'm crying again...I swear, if I cry anymore, I'm gonna end up losing my nose, especially since my allergies are kicking in too! *sniff* But it's okay, I got the power! *nods head* I'm tough, I can make it....yeah! *pounds heart and throws a sign*
    Kit_Yang
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  • From ANON - Raining_like_tears on May 01, 2004
    No fair. I was here on the last chapter too! Stupid thing wouldn't take my review, too many people on line it said. Anyway...it was like 'oh my god' with Ryo. I totally loved this chapter even though Ryo just kept slipping down hill from the last one. It's just like crap hitting the fan, it just goes in all directions from there. I loved the drama of Dee giving him back his key, the slowness in which he revealed it! I loved the image I got of Ryo standing against the cabinet like a little boy in trouble and at a lost of what to do, felt terrible that Rose broke them up, but he did say it was only for the time being. So does that give some hope? And then when Ryo gave Dee that note. Whatever he wrote it just had to be something meaningful to him, especially if Dee crumbled it up and threw it away. Those two chapters on Ryo really made yant ant to feel bad for him. I loved the angst!! But oh my god, it hurts my guts!

    Ok, Ok... to the next chapter on Dee. Sad. He's on a roller coaster between hurting and being angry for getting hurt. He can be such an obnoxious, crass, loud guy that his hurt sensitive side is so overwhelming. I can understand how he would put up emotional anger to protect himself. Like I said sad, both in the beginning and at the end. Oh, and I liked, by the way, how you did the part where he returns to the apartment and he's smiling over the fact that he knew where Ryo had really been and that he was covering himself with stuff he brought home too.

    Well until I get to read you again....soon I hope....
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  • From ANON - Cole\'sLover on May 01, 2004
    Oh, I forgot to tell all the diehard FAKE fangirls that Volume 7 of the manga is now in the bookstores. I got my copy last night. I was NOT disappointed, to say the least. This copy came in a plastic wrapper. The rating went up to 18+ on this one. God, it was wonderful. Dee and Ryo rock as a yaoi couple. Oh, and PLEASE post again SOON. Thanks for the great fic.
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  • From ANON - Cole\'sLover on May 01, 2004
    Wow, this fanfic is just so good. I've really enjoyed reading it so far. I'm a sucker for angsty romances. This sounds just like something Dee would do. He is the possessive/jealous type, especially where Ryo is concerned. I'm curious to see how this storyline plays out. Ryo probably was planning a surpise for Dee (no pun intended) but it backfired on him, literally. PLEASE post another chapter soon. ^-^ I love a happy ending. (hint! hint!)
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  • From ANON - wildefyre on April 30, 2004
    Damn this just gets better and better! I'm in tears here dammit! You are doing such an wonderful job with this and I hope that you don't become swayed by those who feel that Ryo shouldn't be with anyone else BUT Dee and visa versa. Keep up the great work and I'll keep reading! ^_^
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