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Reviews for Portrait Without Sin

By : animeyaoi
  • From ANON - silent angel on April 29, 2004
    OMG this story is really getting hard for me to read. i just want to break down and cry then scream at ryo and dee and that armon guy. but if it gets that kind of reaction then it must be a relly good story, so plz update soon
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  • From ANON - Darcy on April 28, 2004
    I really enjoyed reading your fiction. I must admit, I'd love to see more to it. But I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed reading it. Fantastic.
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  • From ANON - Kit_Yang on April 28, 2004
    Once again, my heart is breaking into a thousand pieces...I CAN'T TAKE ANYMORE!!!!! It's too much to take on! Oh the burden! I will be alright though...I'll just find a needle and thread and mend my heart along the way, to the very end! Til then, I shall await for you update!
    Kit_Yang
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  • From ANON - berner rat killer (laura) on April 28, 2004
    Listen I really hope that you are going to update very soon. I can't wait for the end!
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  • From ANON - KD on April 28, 2004
    I nearly cried!!! It's really painful to see Ryo like that... Please tell me you're not breaking them up!! I'll definitely cry!
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  • From ANON - Devi on April 28, 2004
    Oh, god, I try never to take fanfiction seriously, but if the conclusion doesn't end with 'and they lived happily ever after', I'll go insane! Hurry with the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Nautica on April 28, 2004
    There is definately more right?
    I know you said this was different from the beginning, but I surely hope there is still a happy ending.
    I truly didn't think Ryo would cheat on Dee, and I'm still clinging to a faint hope that it was all a misunderstanding...
    Keep writing! Anxious fans are awaiting! :)

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  • From ANON - Hong Mee on April 27, 2004
    I... can't... even... type right now. I starting crying at the start and I just got louder as I got sadder. Wow. This kind of angst just kills me. *sobs* I'm gonna have to go read something happy now to counter balance. But anyways...

    Nice Work indeed! I think Ryo's affair as a whole might be out of character but I think Dee is definitely on target.

    Can't supress my utter thafor for writing this fic!!!!! It had to be written and I'm so grateful it happened to be you!

    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!

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  • From ANON - JazzyGirl (too lazy to sign in) on April 27, 2004
    *wipes away tears* How sad...poor Ryo...poor Dee...and stupid Berkeley for being such an ass when he knows how much Ryo is hurting! *kicks the stupid Commissioner* Hope to see the next chapter soon...I'm on the edge of my seat here!
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  • From ANON - MiMi on April 27, 2004
    Oh, no, you are killing me here. Please update soon. I need to go get more tissues....hic hic.
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on April 27, 2004
    Oh, sorry, wasn't finished. Also the part of gi Dee Dee that note. You going to tell what was on it. Bet I know from him crumbling it up and throwing it away as to what was on it! Anyway, glad to know your going to do some on Dee now. Hope to be reading you soon again.
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on April 27, 2004
    I cried when he was thinking about Dee sitting there looking at the picture and crying. I loved the part where Dee was giving him back his apartment key. I wondered what happened that got them in trouble or rather Ryo almost in trouble. But I think I can guess that he punched, slapped or tackled him after the give me back my car key thing. Ha! I could just see them all in the office! Poor Ryo, he's losing everything, huh?
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 27, 2004
    I don't know how much longer can can deal with this without having to talk to Dee to tell him what happened, why, and how much he loves Dee. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Raining_like_tears on April 27, 2004
    Ouch! Ryo's getting knocked with one to another thing, that it makes you start to feel sorry for him too. Almost hate to see what's going to happen next, but can't stop reading. Gut wrenching stuff. I want my pillow! Please update soon as possible.
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on April 27, 2004
    HI'mI'm still here. In and out, but still reading. Internet giving me a fit, but anyway... God, when it decided to rain it's just poured, huh? And I mean down pour! Poor guy. Feeling sorry for Ryo a bit, the guy seems to be hurting too. Anyway, please keep up the story. I'll be waiting to read.
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