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Reviews for Portrait Without Sin

By : animeyaoi
  • From ANON - Anon on April 27, 2004
    I don't see how those two are ever gonna make up. Awaiting the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Shinimegami on April 25, 2004
    no, no, no, no. Please don't end it there. The suspense is killing me. Even when I knew I had chapters still to read it was too slow to get to the next chapter. There have been very few stories that I've read that have made me cry. This one is one of them. You are going to explain why all this is happening right? oh please say you are. i couldn't stand it if you didn't. I really like how you have put a different type of story together. Most FAKE stories are how much Ryo and Dee are in love with each other and how perfect their life is. It is rare to see angst like this, very refreshing. I don't know what else I can say to encourage you to finish this story without delay, even if it ends up horrible for Ryo and Dee. I need a conclusion to this. Please get another chapter up soon. I can't wait to read more.

    your humble reader,
    shinimegami
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  • From JazzyGirl on April 25, 2004
    I've been reading this from the beginning, but only just began to review. Great, great job!!!!! Ooh, I can't wait to see what happens!!! You have me in major suspense here! Poor Dee and Ryo!!! ;_; I hope everything works out and they get back together! Please post the next chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - Kit_Yang on April 25, 2004
    I am crying my eyes out!!! This is so freakin' sad...I want to just bang my head against the table and end all this torture! Oh the pain!!! *one hand over my heart, the other reaching out* by the by, thanks for reading Fallen...you weren't the only one...heck, I was pulling my hair out AND crying every chapter!
    Kit_Yang
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  • From ANON - Hong Mee on April 25, 2004
    YES YES YES!! Angst! I love it! Poor Dee! He's gone through the mill this time. I didn't know Ryo could be such a slut! I don't think that's terribly funny but just the situation is so... unique? I'm starting to feel that Dee really does have a point in the way he treats Ryo. Anyways, I'll keep on reviewing as long as you keep writing so update whenever you can, ne?

    I also think the fact that you respond to your reviews is really touching. It shows you care. Awesome babe! ;-)
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  • From ANON - Devi on April 25, 2004
    Ooh, how could you end there? I've got tears in my eyes...please continue soon!
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  • From on April 24, 2004
    I finally got a chance to read this and all I can say is... WOW! I LOVE IT! It's different, it's got emotion, it's got guts! Way to go! It's so nice to see somone unafraid to write outside the so-calles norm! Thank you for that! I'll be going nuts waiting for the next chapter. I also think I know what Ryo was doing too! *grins* Keep up the awesome work and don't let anyone deter you!!
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  • From ANON - Trish on April 23, 2004
    I'm very intrigued, and I'm sorry you got trolled by someone with an overly nasty review. That's really uncalled for--if you don't like someone's fic, DON'T READ IT. I mean, duh. :) I'm looking forward to what comes next.
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  • From ANON - Cole\'sLover on April 22, 2004
    Oh my God, this is one of the most intense and angsty fics I've read involving Dee and Ryo. I, too,e the the DVD and the manga except for Vol. 7. If the bookstore doesn't get that last volume soon I think I will keel over from the suspense. These guys are my favorite yaoi couple. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post again soon. Keep up the great job you're doing with this story.
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  • From ANON - raining_like_tears on April 21, 2004
    OK. WHERE'S MY UPDATE?! I've been crying for nearly three days now....
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  • From ANON - Tirana on April 20, 2004
    This story is very well-written. I'm glad you did write it, although my heart's bleeding now. It's too early to say why Ryo did what he did, but I applaud you for this tale. Well done. Admittedly I'ma Dee/Ryo fanatic, but a good story is a good story. *blows nose* Romantic part of me says I hope Ryo didn't mean to betray Dee. Realistic part of me says, well, these things happen in real life (although I think it's a bit OOC for it to be Ryo, because of his upbringing, but hey, creative freedom). Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Nautica on April 20, 2004
    This is a beautiful story that is exceptionally well written. I'm not familiar with the entire series but I think you've done a great job of characterizing Ryo and Dee. (I've only watched the one hour anime). I hope you keep writing. I can see the story developing in so many ways. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - KD on April 20, 2004
    I'm really hooked onto your fic... You should update soon! And what happened to Ryo?? UPDATE ASA
    P/s
    P/s: I love your style..:)Gambatte!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 19, 2004
    I'm glad Mother Penguin is there to give Dee comfort and advice. She'll know what to do. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Hong Mee on April 19, 2004
    Hello Again! YAY! Another chapter! I'm now so excited about this fanfic! How completely refreshing to the same old scene. Not that I mind the same old "Dee wait for me" bit but this is just the jalepeno to the nachos. You really took a dare writing this little baby as seen from above. ^^; I still can't really see where you are going with this but hey... that just makes you the better writer huh? I have an ifor for the story though if you'd like to hear it, I'mI'm not sure whether or not you've already planned it out. So if interested or you'd just like to bounce ideas somewhere email me!


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