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Reviews for Portrait Without Sin

By : animeyaoi
  • From ANON - Julia on July 23, 2004
    Aww that was hot and sweet at the same time. I'm glad yostedsted it. It was really good. I espiecally like the end. Wonder what's going to happen next. You can't end it yet. It's still gettin good.
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  • From ANON - MiMi on July 23, 2004
    That is one great hot ending! Thank you. I can now save the complete story in my favorite fanfic folder. I am looking forward to your other story, "Wake Me When Death Comes." Thanks again.
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  • From ANON - aspiker on July 23, 2004
    This was a sweet lemon. Tender and loving. 8-) It fits well with Dee and Ryo starting to gingerly taking the first steps towards being a couple again....
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  • From ANON - AkaTsuki on July 23, 2004
    Beutiful my dear just beutiful i luv how you described Ryo in the beggining and the way you had Dee wake Ryo up hehe luverly story

    ~Aka
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  • From ANON - Ladagonagonphire on July 23, 2004
    WOW - fabulous story! A great combination of heartfelt angst, drama, and true love - deliciously well-written. Absolutely amazing. You are an extremely talented writer. The lemon scenes were to die for - Dee and Ryo were totally SEXY and the emotion conveyed within the scenes complimented and added to the overwhelming power of the addicting plot-driven story. Keep up the FANTASTIC writing! :)
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  • From ANON - PocketFox on July 15, 2004
    Oh, wow. This is just beautiful! Normally I don't read chaptered fics, but this one just pulled me in and wouldn't let me go until I finished it, even though it's after three in the morning.asioasionally the language seemed a little stilted or the grammar was a bit off, but this was so entrancing the little mistakes were easily ignored. It was refreshing in a way to find a Dee/Ryo fic that wasn't all happy fluffy, but I'm still so glad they worked things out! It's just wonderful! And I love the way you wrote Dee and Ryo -- I actually can see Dee ovectincting like he did and refusing to listen to Ryo, and I can see Ryo trying and trying to talkhim him before finally retreating into a depression. This story is definitely one of my favorites now!
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  • From ANON - wildefyre on July 05, 2004
    FINALLY! I can actually get the review thingie to show!!! *Jumps for Joy* Oh... The review... Yeah... Just a sec, need to crank up the AC because it got hot in here all of a sudden! *Fans self* Damn and here I am estranged from the hubs for over a year! Talk about torture! Okay, this was hot hot hot! Me liked! *Grins foolishly* You write a mean lemon! Man oh man! (Or as in this case... man on man) I think I'll leave the lemons to you for now on... shoot! I'm glad I finally got to read the rest of this and I am looking forward to reading more. Awesome job!!!
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  • From ANON - Anrui on June 25, 2004
    I really enjoyed reading this and I can't wait untill your next fic comes out. I had to wait awhile untill I could read this chapter *because myputeputer hates me* but it was worth it. Thank you for writing this and let me know when your next one is up, please. OK? Killer! ^_^
    Tight hug, Big kiss
    Anrui
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  • From ANON - Boricua_cet on June 24, 2004
    I just stumbled upon your story today and read it all in one sitting! It made me laugh, it made me gasp, and it almost made me cry! You have a true talent here and this story is nothing short of wonderful! I really + truly LOVED all of it! I think you got the characters and emotions right on target too! Also, I can not wait for the next chapter if you do make the decision to write another!
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  • From ANON - Akucan on June 19, 2004
    I love this story. It is so well told and your attention to detail is fabulous. And throughout the whole story you have managed to balance the fine line of angst without falling into mellow drama, not an easy thing to accomplish. I've just recently read the manga series and your's is my first foray in FAKE fanfic. A good first bite I must say. I've just finished reading the first 16 chapters of this story and I read them all in one sitting. Though I've thoroughly enjoyed the whole story, Chapter 10 had me in tears, honestly, big ploppy tears. I was just glad there was no one else awake to see that.
    Anyway like the rest of your faithful readers I will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter.
    Akuchan
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  • From ANON - may_neuma on June 18, 2004
    Wow, that was tough. U let readers hanging until the 10th CH. That what made the story different. Fortunately, I'm a very patient and curious reader. That's why I keep reading it til the end, usually good writer will reveal the real conflict in the end. And I do think that u understand each chara of FAKE, your greatest points in this story are feeling and details. Man, this is one of the best fic of FAKE i've read so far. U made me wanna cry, screaming, and jumping so badly. The bad thing is I'm on a public place. So, all I could do is smilling ^.^ but I do really like ur fic. Only one thing, do u realize that u made Ryo a bit weak and too forgiveful? Shame that love made everbody change, isn't it? You should made longer chapter after the climax. YUMMY! oops...BUt, I'm a big supporter for them, my wish that they are happy everafter. Hey, if u made other fics kindly inform me will you? My e-mail: spark_lens@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Amethyst on June 17, 2004
    There were times I thought I was gonna die reading this, my guts were twisted so much. Really great work of a story! I really liked the twist you did there toward the end when it looked like they were going to get together, but then you held off for that extra bit of wait. Well well worth it! Those next chapters were HOT! You mentioned about 'forced to write another lemon scene', well, I'm twisting your arm. Would like to see what else you can come up with on this one. After all that pain and torture that they went through, I think they deserve it!
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  • From ANON - myndi_mindy on June 16, 2004
    This is an incrediable story. You wrote this very well, pulling in each of their emotions that you just love, felt sorry for, and ready to knock down both of them. And as for the lemon, O_O I think you did a really good job. I like how you took it slow because that showed Dee was out for more than just something quick. Please writetherther lemon before ending this. I think there's more that you can put into it before the very end.
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  • From ANON - raining_like_tears on June 15, 2004
    I--Think--I--Need--More. Even though there was a lot there. I'm so happy how you wrote the scenes between Dee and Ryo! I love the way Dee's taking care of him. You mentioned to a reviewer about deciding the order of doing the two and if this is what you had in mind, I see how this was best. I love the way you dialog the two in banter. And the times Ryo cries... well, he does that in the book on occassion(? spelling). I like the descriptive detail you use, kind of like moment by moment play. Anyway, I for one enjoyed it. I hate to see it end if if you throw in maybe one more lemon I'd be really happy.

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  • From ANON - windsurfer on June 15, 2004
    Just found this site really by accident and I just love it! I just started checking out different stories which this site contains and came across yours. I didn't know really anything about Fake, but I decided to check it out. Even not knowing these two, I have to say you drew me in until I read the entire story! This was great! The first chapter was short but it had me give it a chance through the second one. I thought wow, I'll just see how this develops. The third chapter started getting me in tears. You had me going at first, but then I thought that there just had to be something else that was going on. You did a great job with their emotions that you couldn't fault either one. And by the time you got to the last couple of chapters, I was just as ready for that to happen as any other rabid-fan. And you wrote the scenes so well. Really intense scenes, I wish I was there! After reading this one, I'm going to check out some others here and I think I want to check out the real story as well just to see how and why these two are so knitted together. Look forward to reading more of this.
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